|Reviews for Trust Issues|
| Guest chapter 29 . 2/16
| nathasa39 chapter 29 . 12/20/2013
Esta historia es genial y muy interesante, espero que algún día decida retomarla, gracias por su trabajo.
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 29 . 8/31/2013
now I realize that you have a real life and you don't owe us a chapter but this is an evil evil place to leave it and I am quite cliffhung.
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 27 . 8/31/2013
damn son look at this badass legit family conversation. I feel like I'm having revelations all over the place here! the Nate /Hardison father son thing holy crap how did I never think of that before? right from the beginning their relationship has had that kind of easy going mentoring aspect to it... And doggone but I totally had a brain explosion when I realized that Nate never got to experience with Sam the transition from having a son who thinks he's Superman, can do anything, basically flawless hero dad to having a son who realizes that his dad is a human too. so the bit about Nate blowing it out of proportion when the others criticize him was a perfect bit of characterization.
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 21 . 8/31/2013
this is an amazing chapter! Nate in full on mastermind mode is a beautiful thing to behold. Him working the guys in the room and his team on the other end... really great. and the relayed multipart conversation with Parker as the middleman was great, hilarious but totally believable. I also like seeing how Nate is not just a brain but also physically very stubborn and capable.
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 18 . 8/31/2013
Another small error: when describing Nate waking up you said 'he was a stiff', and a stiff as far as I know means a corpse so I'm not sure what you were trying to say there.
I really like the way you're handling Nate's character. I also like your original characters: they seem very true to life.
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
Small correction for the first line: it should be 'Hardison gaped' or 'gasped', not 'gapped'.
I like this chapter even if its short on action. I love Leverage for the competence porn, so its great to see the smart people bein smart :)
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
This is frustrating but totes believable. Nate seriously thinks too much, i can smell the burning rubber from his brain running in hamster-wheel circles. (Also, trivia, did u know that being an alcoholic drops u 15 IQ points? Think how busy his brain would be!)
| stellaru chapter 29 . 12/10/2012
Ahh, I forgot to review thid earlier. Nice chapter! Things are clicking into place and I love the Nate and Sophie stuff at the end!
| Sphinx chapter 29 . 12/8/2012
Nice to see an update from you! Great chapter! Who knew Doc would turn out to be kinda sorta at the center of things? I sure didn't! XD Excellent plot twist. I'm itching to know more! Update when you can! I'll be on the lookout for it!
| gibbsrossi chapter 29 . 12/6/2012
Glad to see an update...welcome back hope the next one is not too long in coming :)
| The Wild Wild Whovian chapter 29 . 12/6/2012
Oh, I see those magic words at the end of the chapter! (Yes, the first thing I do is scroll down to see if it says 'to be continued' or 'the end'!)
Everyone’s attention was completely on Doc now. [So is mine! Say what?]
“And if you ever pull an idiotic stunt like that again, I will slap you senseless, have Eliot revive you, and do it all over again,” she finished. [Ok, I literally laughed out loud on that one!]
Ooooo... nice ending!
Enjoyable chapter, and with a totally unexpected twist in the middle!
| stellaru chapter 28 . 11/17/2012
Aw, another nice chapter. I really liked the heart-to-heart there between Nate and Hardison, and Parker trying to find an uninjured part to touch and having to settle on a knee, lol! I'm so glad we still have some more chapters on this one!
| Sphinx chapter 28 . 11/15/2012
Great chapter. I loved Nate's and Hardison's heart-to-heart. I'm glad they patched things up. And I loved Parker at the end there. Total classic Parker. XD And Nate's thoughts at the end regarding Sophie were funny. I'd like to know that, too. Maybe she's saving up for later. Or maybe she hasn't yet quite figured out how she wants to react yet? I dunno, but I hope to find out. :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
| gibbsrossi chapter 28 . 11/14/2012