love it man update soon!

Love! :) Can't WAIT til your update!

Wow...just...wow.

The descriptive words you used were spectacular, to say the least. Your prose is nearly perfection. Whenever I would read what Amy's facial expressions were, they were clear as a bell in my mind because of the beautiful picture you painted with your words. Emotions are something I have struggled to vividly depict, but here you come along and just have them down perfectly.

The only possible critique I could offer is that their romance might be moving along too swiftly. While it is possible that it may just be me, I do love to see characters first grow out of a friendship zone, then into more romantic escapades. Actually, compared to other stories of this type I have read, you are doing a satisfactory job; I just wasn't sure if he should be caressing her cheek the very next time he had an intimate moment with her. I would've expected it to maybe be a bit more awkward than it apparently already was, however this is just me being picky.

Overall, I think this is a wonderful piece of literature. Keep it beautiful and simple, just as you are doing now. You and your fantastic Beta have truely put out something great.

That was adorable! (Yes, that was my inner SonAmy fangirl calling out. ;D )

Like this story alot! Please continue with it, its too cute :)