Reviews for Those Spanish Codes
cK chapter 13 . 7/4/2005
wow! its really cool and i tink u've done a really awesome job capturing the characters! there r so few jack/nina fics out there, i'm glad i found urs! thx for writing
albhedgirl chapter 13 . 6/11/2005
excellent, excellent! love ur story, has it all: romance, action and humour! keep writing
Kalena chapter 13 . 11/26/2003
Wow! Very intense...I like the stories with Jack/Nina (also Tony/Michele) Anyway..well done!
Wildcat Wells chapter 12 . 4/24/2003
Hmm...okay, well, it's a little weird for me to post this, as I am using my SCHOOL's account to review here... (Feels v. naughty) But as far as the NC-17 bit goes, you could up the rating to R and cut off the scene when it starts to get a little too hot and heavy. I've seen authors do that. But I went and read the NC-17 bit, and a lot of the dialogue in there is good stuff, and could sort of build a little more of the plot. It seems like an awkward transition without that chapter. Just a suggestion.

Caspican Duck Duck chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
this is good but I'm not a fan of Jack whumping lol
jd burns chapter 13 . 12/29/2002
Good description in getting the story started and setting up the story's premise. I love the chemistry between Jack and Nina!
KSIsMagic chapter 13 . 12/21/2002
It's over... it's really over. NOOOO! You did an excellent job writing about Jack and Nina's excellent job, going to hell and back. Oh, if J only knew that another, far more dangerous sort of hell was right in front of him.

"worn brown t- shirt with an embroidered horse on one corner"

Was that a shout-out to Pony Girl?

"You know, the density of the air aside, I've always postulated that the effect on orgasm at several thousand feet is always more intriguing because of the adage that goes with it."

LOL! That, followed by J's "shut up" is classic.

Oh, and the one-sentence chapter summary for blondes was cute. I'm so proud I didn't need it! Yes, I understood it all just from reading the chapter... I swear I'm telling the truth. ;)

*singing your praises*

KSIsMagic chapter 12 . 11/28/2002
Whee, I made it! It's been so long, but this fic is really easy to get back into.

My favourite line: wrapping an arm around his neck and a leg around his waist and pulling him closer to popped the trunk and began to strip his shirt off, Just as a watched pot never boils, so a watched fence hole is never jumped through
Alien Angie chapter 12 . 11/20/2002
WOW! Thanks for emailing me and letting me know that this chapter was up...I have to say I was expecting Jack to get caught at the end though. Im in the UK, so I dont have the 2nd season yet, so Im relying on you to keep me sane and provide me with my 24 fix! LOL

Cant wait for the next part, and with the whole uni thing - I know how you feel, Ive not long started my 2nd year in my equine studies degree, and I hardly have time to breathe (or look after my 2 horses!)


Alien Angie - couldnt be bothered to sign in chapter 1 . 11/10/2002
Hiya...wheres the next part (CH12)? Your keeping me on tenderhooks here! LOL


Alien Angie chapter 11 . 9/28/2002
Hi, I was really looking forward to this chapter, and I thought it was brilliant, although I wouldnt mind a little more 'Jack Whumping' though LOL

Cant wait for part 12


KSIsMagic chapter 10 . 9/16/2002
I'm here... finally. Love the latest chapters, dearie! You've struck the right balance of cuteness and realism, which is quite an accomplishment. I don't mind either one on their own, but together they're dyn-o-mite! Just like Jacko and Nino. Keep on with your bad self. ;)

BTW, at the bottom of this review box there's a little advice thingie saying a reviwer should comment on an aspect of the ff that can be improved upon. Thank you, oh wise ones, but there ain't a damn thing that needs improving in this fiction. So there! D'ya think they put that in to incite war? You know 90% of fic writers cannot take any criticism, constructive or otherwise; and to ask people to give 'em just that is a recipe for disaster. Hmmm...

Alien Angie chapter 4 . 9/8/2002
Alien Angie chapter 10 . 8/24/2002
Brilliant, this story keeps getting better and better! Thanks for emailing me, I was going to email you back to say thanks, but for some reason my pc keeps crashig whe I get to the reply screen! Have a nice holiday, and i cant wait for the next part!


Alien Angie - couldnt be bothered to sign in chapter 9 . 8/11/2002
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