Reviews for If You Can't Take the Heat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SO CUTE! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very well-written. Thanks for writing this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your writing is wonderful, lovely, captivating for a lemon. i was stuck reading it. i can feel the love. a great example of how a one-shot should be :) |
![]() ![]() Well eratic, but it would be much awesome if you were to reread and correct grammar errors! Over all i feel ya ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . .! Good job dude! \m/ |
![]() ![]() Wow. I have no words. It was that good. I kid you not. I just heard about "Fairy Tail" believe it or not (yes, I know-very sad) and I'm only on episode 8. And I have been reading lemons-mostly one-shots because chapters bore me-for a long time. This is the best one I've read yet. I love it. X3 xoxo *BLUSHES* |
![]() ![]() mhmmmm that was nice :3 definitely enjoyed this one! great work, it's a very well done story! the way you presented nalu is soooo cute heart (would log in but comp is fighting me lol. wil def come back to fav after i actually get some sleep :P) |
![]() ![]() Well damn I would have to say that this one-shot surely made me hot and bothered. It was like this lemon seduced me as well, haha. Great job for a first lemon. Well written, understandable, great sentence structure, keeps the reader going, and just sweet—or shall I say hot perfection? Natsu you sexy ass dragon, you. Seduce me... ** |
![]() ![]() Oh, WOW this was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a amazing one shot! Everything leading up to it was so good :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW...that was amazing and for a first lemon, that too was amazing. A great one-shot and something that il definitely read over and over again |
![]() ![]() ![]() K-Kya /);o;/) that's amazing and made me feel awkward reading it but golly gee thats awesome! |
![]() ![]() Wait that was your 1st lemon? Holy crap. You are GOOD. Amazing job I adore the storyline and everything c: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best one-shot ever. Doesn't look like your first lemon at all. Love it! |