Reviews for If You Can't Take the Heat
ThunderWolf1324 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
AYE SIR! TT I was blown away!
ThornsandRoses12 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwww
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Really fun and smexy. This one shot takes Natsu from his normal oblivious self into Loke's playboy turf with very little except a conversation with Happy (who we all know is very charming, but unsuccessful suitor himself) to make the transition. Nevertheless, once he's made the switch, he's adorable!
Asuri-san chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
I never thought this could happen. It is written really nice.
Sky-Angel14 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Cool story! :)
NonExistentNinja chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
This was great! I found myself wanting it to end (so I can know what happens lol) and not wanting it to end because it was written so well an the story was so good :D
ironandpen chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
w-wooow! that's hot! never seen something as deliriously good as your story! you're amazing!
k1096 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Yeap he sure does want something from you Lucy.. You're gonna bite back your words of wanting to seduce him xD ahh I love you, Mirajane!
Ahaahah Natsu caught on! Man you better run Lucy. Wait no for the fans, don't B)
Holy Mavis ! Natsu's so mature and bad ass but that could be his hormones in action xD
"Cumbersome" nice Natsu B) it's like Natsu has another side of him; the horny, smart, preditor Natsu. Me likey

Nice long one shot! x) loves it! Ahh I can feel the NaLu love in the air it's so beautiful xD
E-Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
The amount of blushing that took over me as I read this was... too damn high!

God, I fucking love it when fics show Natsu being all... hklfjadklgjdg animalistic. hkijgklkgj
I had to dig through many piles of shit fanfics to find this jewel right here. Your writing shines with it's pristine grammar, spelling, pace, development, and plot. Please, do continue to give hope to the more, ahem, "mature" fans of Fairy Tail...
Creativity at its best chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
oh my word this is real hot!dam good writer!
Jesus Christ chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
sweetheartb chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
I could stay all day describing how much I love your fic.
I always read when I can. Never had left before review by sheer laziness, I'm sorry.
I hope one day you can write more about Nalu.
In fact, you would allow me to translate your fic for my official language? That would make me very happy!
Ascaisil chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Wow, this was really excellently written. Loved their interactions. :)
Uchiha Evangeline chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Really well done! You did anice job here, I love when someone decides to write Natsu wild like that.
MissySullivan chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I liked it a lot! Good job :D
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