Reviews for The Babysitter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to take a moment to share my thoughts on your story. I loved it! The creative writing makes it truly enjoyable and engaging. This story has great potential to be converted into a comic. and I believe audiences would love it if it were adapted into that format. Contact info: Discord: itsgametech Instagram: itsgametech |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love love love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Edward, he really has it bad for Bella. Will we get Bella's pov anytime? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooo, Bell got caught! Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So she coming to college and he is taking her to prom. I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is a manipulative, bipolar, immature bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was perfect! A little bummed how quickly the ending seemed but glad everything worked out in the end! Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Thank you for sharing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I do agree with the other reviews I read before reading it myself. We need a little more of these two…are you really finished with this story?! I hope not! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First chapter was sooooo good! Other chpaters are... nuh-uh... Bella is a idiot :) Thank you! I enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() Loved it. Regards Toni Smith. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This feels really unfinished. Edward is kind of an asshole in this fic and Bella is flighty af. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love It! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great. It was from Edward’s pov so I would have to say that Bella was at fault for their problems. Whose sis to say since I don’t know her pov, not that Edward was easy. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad that they took so so long to get together. 10 yrs is a long time. Glad b didn’t put up with Es crap. The ending was great, though. I def could use an epi! |