Reviews for Hello Beautiful
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 105 . 12/4/2014
I seriously loved this story! Started at the beginning and was hooked! I loved all of Edwards points of view, we're you playing on doing part 2 of the epilogue? Just curious. But seriously I was definitely turned on by your lime juice and then the lemon hit and whoo buddy delicious! Love your writing and I can't wait to read more! Have to give mad props to Artful Maneuvers by planetblue who recc'ed this, fantastic suggestion!
polyphany chapter 105 . 11/30/2014
Loved reading this, thank you so much for sharing!
lemonangeljuice chapter 105 . 11/22/2014
Hello beautiful (love the title) was alot of fun. I didn't feel Edward was a creepy "daddy". Thank you!
robertpatzlover09 chapter 105 . 11/21/2014
not the type of story i wouldread but im glad i did it was so good
EAMC1992 chapter 41 . 11/9/2014
he's not impotent he just can't get it up for renee
EAMC1992 chapter 37 . 11/9/2014
it's phil the f**king mayor
EAMC1992 chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
i can already see that Renee will be a b**** in this story later on
EDWARD AND BEAAL 4EVER SCREW RENEE AND ANY OTHER GIRL WHO THINK THAT THEY WILL EVER HAVE A CHANCE
jk chapter 72 . 9/2/2014
Um dude he used to be on
Love with or mom...he ducked or mom for years...I can't tell u how ducking gross this is...and she loves him? Why? He's twice her age! And he ducked her mom!ยก!
jk chapter 71 . 9/2/2014
Idont cheat...so just now when my cock was in or mouth you know the same one that was in or mother...that wasn't cheating...oh by the way how does or moms pussy taste?
jk chapter 14 . 9/2/2014
She wears her step dads shirts that's gross...I can't believe she wants thesam cock that's been in her mom...that's soooooo fuckin gross
jk chapter 2 . 9/2/2014
Let me get this straight...she wants her moms sloppy seconds...oh that's fuckin gross
Cindy chapter 105 . 8/17/2014
I loved this story and want to thank you for sharing. I really hope you write another story soon. Your style is so refreshing and interesting.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Hello beautiful (ch)!(ch)
silversimon chapter 83 . 7/24/2014
Walk of shame in their party clothes? :)
silversimon chapter 71 . 7/24/2014
Please do not allow the greedy, conniving, adulterous Renee receive a dime in alimony or property settlement when Edward divorces her ass!
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