Reviews for Hello Beautiful
coolskullcat14 chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
which step father? phil or edwards dad?
Denishea Bates chapter 10 . 6/4/2018
What the hell Renee?!
Fluffyrainbow23 chapter 105 . 4/13/2018
I loved this story it’s so good!
Guest chapter 92 . 3/21/2018
so many emotions! love it!
6Abandoned-bicycle9 chapter 105 . 12/3/2017
This was undoubtedly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Thank you so much for allowing us to read it! You really have a fantastic ability to write, especially erotic stories
6Abandoned-bicycle9 chapter 43 . 11/29/2017
I live for your Author's Notes! The only thing I would change so far in this story is length; I desperately want it to be longer!
6Abandoned-bicycle9 chapter 39 . 11/29/2017
PLEASE JUST TELL EDWARD SO THAT WE CAN GET TO THE LEMONS!1!11
6Abandoned-bicycle9 chapter 5 . 11/27/2017
I am so unbelievably excited to read this...
Twiheart1901EC chapter 105 . 10/23/2017
Very unconventional but I definitely enjoyed that!
ChristyWIX chapter 105 . 9/27/2017
This was so many different kinds of yummy. I normally steer away from cheater fics but, this one had me intrigued from go. Very, Rey good story you created here. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 13 . 9/25/2017
I'm confused how Bella is 'nearly 18' when this takes place three years after Edward proposed to Renee. Bella was 15 when they started dating and Bella mentions they had been dating for 8 months by the two e he proposed. Shouldn't she be over 1 already? Maybe even closer to 19 by now?
love thy neighbor as thyself chapter 41 . 4/12/2017
Type your review stop using the Lord's NAME as a swearing vocabulary. HIS NAME is story would be better without the swearing of HIS HOLY NAME.
jenninemarie chapter 105 . 3/26/2017
I would love another epilogue
SdaisyS chapter 105 . 2/12/2017
Your summary intrigued me, however, I was kind of hesitant to read with the super short chapters, but as I continued and as they got longer & more... way more interesting, I enjoyed the story. Wish there were more from Epov - like when Bella walked into the bedroom &... 'helped' him with his 'problem'.

Thanks for sharing!
JustARead chapter 102 . 2/8/2017
Renee still didn't get phil smh
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