|Reviews for Not To Be Seen|
| luvgoround chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
| paynesgrey chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
This was lovely! Fantastic work.
| thorteso chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Another wonderful (read hot) story. Love Violet too. Looking forward to more adventures of this family!
| didyouhaveagoodtime chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Oh yes, later. Love it, just as I love everything ATiL related ;)
| smndolphin chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
What a pleasant surprise to see something from this universe and as much as I love seeing the children, AtiL has always been about Matthew and Mary as a couple and so it was nice to see just the two of them. Definitely loved the parallels drawn to AtiL's version of 2x04 given what they were wearing. I really loved how you reworked the episode for the new universe and the reminders here were perfect. One of the things I loved about AtiL was how the fire never went out or dimmed with Matthew and Mary the longer they were married, but rather it grew, and this is further proof of that. It was so sweet how Matthew's only focus in getting them alone was all about her :). Loved how Carson kept his patent stoic expression in place and it was also a nice glimpse of how well they were all dealing with Matthew settling in as Earl et al. And the last bit with Violet was all kinds of priceless! Of course she would ignore Carson and just barge right in so very good timing on all counts :P
I love that you drop in on this universe from time to time and I hope that doesn't change. As always, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful writing with us and looking forward to reading you write next :)
| pamylz chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Love it! Makes me so very content seeing them happy and in pure enjoyment of their lives. I do miss the children but this was too good to miss. Yay.
| candyluvsu chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I can't wait to see what other ideas you have :)
| R. Grace chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Oh, my! If only all men were as selfless as Matthew. *sigh* I may have to (accidentally, of course) leave this story open on my husband's laptop and see if he gets any ideas. ;)
| Chickwriter chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
ACTIVE!MATTHEW is the best Matthew... that is all. :D Well done, smut goddess :D
| Tripp3235 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Just in the nick of time wasn't it? Hee.
Loved it. Nothing like a dirty piece of fluff to get the weekend started right!
| jupisan chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
please tell you gonna write the later to this please.
damn lucky lucky Mary.
| Pemonynen chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Aaaahhh! SO. MUCH. HOTNESS.
Matthew in uniform - YES. Matthew in charge - YES. Matthew generally being perfect and worshipping Mary - YES. UNF TO ALL. They are insatiable, but it's still just so wonderfully, perfectly, tender and loving between them. And I love the hints that fifteen minutes is just not long enough... OF COURSE IT ISN'T.
Perfect smut is perfect. :D
| EOlivet chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
AHHH, the ENDING to this is fantastic (surprise!Violet, hee! :) but wow, dominant! Earl Matthew is just so HOT. ;) The authority in commanding Carson and then...whew! Your porn physics are unparalleled (foot on his shoulder, OMG) and just the *idea* that Mary has to be quiet...whew! Thank you for this surprise treat (that's what she said :p ) And the title is PERFECT, as well. :) Keep writing! :D
| Kavan chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Very hot and very nice.
I liked the bit especially where the white flash takes Matthew back to the war, and the way Mary instantly reaches over to comfort him. They really know each other so well.
BTW everytime Carson does his Lord Downton bit, I imagine that Mabel, Kit and Lucy are locking Bobby in a closet or doing something to let him know how seriously they take the Lord Downton bit.