Reviews for The Girl Who Jumped
shc92 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Beautiful story. The loneliness was so poignant and then there's the humor ... every time Bella referenced the kids, lol ... this is where I snorted out loud

"...It takes everything I have not to pluck her from my lap and drop her to the ground...Edward hands the barfer to Rose and grabs some towels from the kitchen."

The last line was perfect. Thank you for sharing and congrats on the contest win!
darcysmom chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I loved the whole story, but the last line... It wrecked me. So good.
happiness5678 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Just found this awesome one-shot. Wow! Beautiful writing style...interesting characters, perfect length. Thanks!
amelia chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
i am just amazed. i am so very in awe of your way with words! i was taken in before the story was even under way. i ended it in tears. i adored this couple's journey.

Thank you for writing!
TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Beautiful story! :)
like smoke in my lungs chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I loved this, wow. Perfect length, too.
kleotwifrenzie chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I loved it! Great story! Thank you
blue125 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
What a beautiful story! I absolutely loved it. And I absolutely love your writing style too - so beautiful!
gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
i love it
mem4375 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Loved this story! Even when I wanted to shake her, I was rooting for her.
NPakus chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Absolutely loved this!
msmargo chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
lovely story. i want an edward. who the hell doesn't?
Irish Charm chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
God that was incredible. It was so honest and heartfelt.
we live for love chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Loved it.
sugarghc chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Beautiful.
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