Reviews for Shattered Glass
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
love this poem! It's really amazing, you're a very good author;)
Song of Grey Lemons chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This is rather haunting, with the repeating undertone of glass. I think that it captures Bellatrix's emotions well. A few favorite lines:
1. Sculpt me as you will
2. You are change, a valiant, violent whirlwind /
Ripping the world out by its roots
3. You are chaos, sweet, sweet chaos
4. The fractures look like spider webs
5. Running into myself around every corner
6.) To dance in shattered glass and hellfire
lella7 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I don't really read a lot of poetry on here, but I couldn't resist a Bellamort poem :) I thought this was fantastic, you described her fascination and obssession with Voldemort brilliantly and the glass imagery was beautiful. Good job :)