Reviews for Invictus In the Black
DocCBM chapter 15 . 8/22/2014
Sad and ominous. Nice build.
DocCBM chapter 14 . 8/22/2014
More stressors. Nice development.
DocCBM chapter 13 . 8/22/2014
Wedding well done.
DocCBM chapter 12 . 8/22/2014
Love the predatory nature of their interactions. Great chemistry.
DocCBM chapter 11 . 8/21/2014
Fight too quick. But story really romance so works.
DocCBM chapter 10 . 8/21/2014
Looking forward to niska. Still very good.
DocCBM chapter 9 . 8/21/2014
Like how things come together. Like how Jayne isn't as seems.
DocCBM chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
Very good. Nice first night.
DocCBM chapter 7 . 8/20/2014
Nice romance with couple. Straight forward.
DocCBM chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
Love the changes. Work well.
DocCBM chapter 5 . 8/20/2014
More pitch black. Still nice river encorporation.
DocCBM chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
More pitch black goodness.
DocCBM chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
Love how you can incorporate River into pitch black. Very smooth.
DocCBM chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
Lovely how river and Riddick dance around each other.
DocCBM chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Love this story. Deserves reviews.
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