|Reviews for Invictus In the Black|
| Vripxcordv86 chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
Please for the love of reading right the next part to rid sick please please please I love your story's!
| Rainbor123 chapter 16 . 11/9/2013
This was VERY GOOD. It is 3AM, but still I will go on to the next one- I REALLY hope you already have it up and complete!
| SeanHicks4 chapter 16 . 10/31/2013
Interesting take on how River and Riddick got together
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/18/2013
Other than the smutty bits, it's a good read. Very good read. The smutty bits I can scroll on by, so it makes no never mind. :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/18/2013
Very good writing. 2nd story of yours I've read so far. Keep up the very good works please.
| Chelsea16Targaryen chapter 11 . 9/2/2013
I've read this a couple of times I love the idea of riddick and river and this its well writen, love it
| jeanpaulreddy93 chapter 16 . 8/27/2013
Awesome story, really great but I just had a wicked thought... Your description of Ridick's animal side kind of reminds me of Wolverine from the X-men franchise. For some reason, i cant get the idea of Harry Potter with Wolverine's ability being in the situation that Ridick is...
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
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| SixPerfections chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Interesting story, its actually pretty well written. I'm liking it very much so far. I think its kinda cool/funny how they are planning on Serenity to come rescue them. The only thing I'm not crazy about is how river/Riddick are instantly all hot for each other. But that's just a personal preference, I like romance/attraction to build slowly over time but it doesn't always have to be that way. Anyway I think this is good so far, will read a little more :D
| RonneeM chapter 16 . 3/2/2013
One of the best Riddick stories I've read - well written, well plotted and even better explication of motivations. I also like the way that River Tam and Zoe are woven into the story so that they appear to be seemly part of the Pitch Black tale. Very well done.
| Regin chapter 16 . 1/5/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
| Tempest S chapter 5 . 10/9/2012
zāo gāo (crap/spoiled cake). Is that the real translation? Big difference there.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
I've always felt the same way about fry...she seemed so cowardly. More and more every time I watched that movie, which was A LOT... Also I loved your line about how river was created to make Riddick curse...absolutely wonderful!
| briarprincess chapter 16 . 9/14/2012
Once I started reading this pairing I loved it right away, they just work together. This stroy has been wonderful and I cant wait to read the sequel.
| Lyzzybelle chapter 7 . 9/4/2012
Yay...river is home!
I adore all of the literary references in your fic. You have put alot of thought into your story and it shows. Another excellent chapter.