|Reviews for Mutually Assured Madness|
| Bronze chapter 1 . 1/9
Seems to me I've read this all before in the Bolo Novel David Drake.
| BEEL chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
VERY, VERY GOOD Beginning! Just fleshing out and fitting an end is all that's needed!
| Fleet of Fog chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I like the detail of your story. It reminds me a lot of the story 'A Time To Kill" by David Weber.
Some of your sentences are a bit strange in their wording, but over all it's a good story.
| Edhla chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
This is a really well-written fic, and I can only assume that nobody has reviewed it before because it's in a small fandom, not because of the quality.
You have a very confident writing style, though I found you repeated words and phrases a little awkwardly in places (e.g. "endless time... second time.")
It's a clever premise and quite detailed, which makes me confident as a reader that you know what you're writing about. Which is good :) I like the care you've taken with the plot.
I thought your narrator voice was strong, overall, though he (she?) did tend to go a little overboard with cold exposition sometimes, and I didn't really get a good sense of who they are as a person outside of their duty.
That last line is fantastic. Well done indeed x