Reviews for First Try: Team Tetsuo
bonolomokgalapa chapter 1 . 12/11/2021
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarrisa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . .
My apologies for any inconvenience this may cause
Arshe chapter 14 . 12/7/2021
Author: "So, you packed your entire apartment?" he asked.

"Yup." Naruto replied. "Everything but the trash."

Me: "...and the toilet and the kitchen sink."
nahuelvera2 chapter 41 . 8/4/2021
Siendo sincero, me atrapa más los personajes secundarios que el propio Naruto.
nahuelvera2 chapter 30 . 7/29/2021
Lástima que toda la experiencia de Koharu no se haya visto en el anime cuando Naruto grafiteaba el monumento.
nahuelvera2 chapter 19 . 7/26/2021
Cierto, nadie ve a los civiles, tranquilamente podrían ser kamikazes como en The Last, o alguna red de espionaje/contrabando.
nahuelvera2 chapter 6 . 7/21/2021
Es un hijo de perra, pero sabe bien lo que hace.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/16/2021
What twelve-year-old girl goes on a diet who's not morbidly obese. This is one thing from canon that really got on my nerves.

Good job making what could have been a filler chapter into interestingness plot development.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 41 . 3/14/2021
I was loving this one so much I hope someday you comeback to it if only to know what happened in chunin exams and if Naruto got that they are spies and not spouses.

Also Anko is with Orochimaru in your fic? It could have been awesome if he hadn’t and had trained Naruto to the final exam.

If you give only a sinopsis of what would have happened you make me really really happy.

I love that all of Konoha coincidences helped Suna not to killed them selves with the plot of the invasion because that was really stupid they end up with half of his ninja and a worse treaty because they had to pay reparations.
Mortzo chapter 41 . 2/15/2021
so sad nothing more to read :'( great work
engel17white chapter 41 . 12/3/2020
interesante no se si alguna vez lo continuaras o no, pero si lo haces seria interesante que este gaara llegara a la conclusión que solo obtendría verdadero aprecio y amistad de otros que sean "como él" (jinchurrikis)
saludos desde mexico
engel17white chapter 25 . 11/27/2020
para bien o para mal dejar vivir a esos niños es una decisión que luego llegara a morderle el trasero
podria haber agregado que un niño se desperto e intento atacar a sasuke y este estuviera a punto de matarlo, habría sido muy traumático
Yue in the Stars chapter 6 . 8/18/2020
Barako: imma run you outta town
Danzo: So You Have Chosen Death
RandyKaguyaofthewasteland chapter 6 . 8/5/2020
Rereading these is honestly better than my first time, because I have more appreciation for the little side stories. Hope your well. Your still my favorite naruto fanfic author.
BurnedMiw chapter 11 . 8/4/2020
Wow... The kid has issues...
BurnedMiw chapter 7 . 8/4/2020
Too short but good one
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