Reviews for How they ended up in care
Sophie Emelia Fr chapter 40 . 8/14
Yes they are blue. What happened to the dog?
Amelia chapter 1 . 8/13
The explanation was ok . I enjoyed the text but there were some very silly spelling mistakes . Like head ,which was written as hed , and lady ,which was written at lade. Other than that it was good .
Lettuce leaf chapter 35 . 6/16
Wow, this was so well written! When I saw Kitty, I wondered if she had been abused, this really links to and explains her behaviour.
breather89 chapter 42 . 5/30
Yeah, you did pretty well.
Maleeha x chapter 42 . 5/29
lol hey this story is good, i like to say i read peoples reviews its funny i mean i havent you get what i mean i read on here just want to say that ignore the haters hun tthey no good for nothing they just jealous ok, so any hate just block/ report or ignore as this story is beautiful wrotten
Anne pattison chapter 36 . 5/8
Hi nice story telling.
Can you tell tee to call me
Maida chapter 25 . 3/14
Tracy breaker I watch Tracy breaker returns and the dumping ground and I love it and this story or "article" you have written is inspiring
Amber Hurst chapter 10 . 1/5
"Mum I hate you!" Screamed 13 Year old Amber as she kicked her mum very hard in the was very angry because her mum wouldn't let her go out with her friends for the night."Amber this is not accepta..OUCH! AMBER STOP IT!"Amber kept kicking and kicking until Melanie her mum ran into the bathroom crying and locked the door. Amber hurried over to the bathroom door to listen. As she did this she whispered: "Mummy, I'm sorry." Amber peeked through the keyhole and saw her mum pick up a Blade. She then whispered: "No please.. NO!...NOOOOOO!" Amber heard the scream as she saw her mum slit her wrists and dropped dead to the floor. Cold blood snaked around her mum as she watched. Quick as a wink, Amber raced upstairs and grabbed the phone. She dialled 999 and waited for someone to answer. "999, How can I help you?" The lady spoke.
"My n..name is Amber Hurst and my mum just committed suicide." Amber saw tears roll down her cheek as she spoke.
"That is horrible dear. What is your address? We will call an ambulance round as soon as possible!"
"It is 23 Blossom Avenue" Amber said.
"Okay darling keep calm we will come!"
20 hours later the ambulance arrives. Amber dashes out of her living room to meet them. "Hello darlin." one of them says. ... All amber can do is run and run and run. Tears rolling down her eyes amber makes her way to the Ice cream shop. She races in and as she does she bumps into a tall guy with white hair and a friendly looking face. "Oops. Sorry. My name is Mike Milligan and what's yours?"
"Amber.."
"Nice name. Why the sad face Amber?"
"My mum... Just.. Committed suicide.."
"Th-a-t is terrible.."
"I know and I ran away from the paramedics and now I have nowhere to go.." Amber started to cry again.
"Don't cry sweetie. I work for a Lovely house called Stowey house and we will take you there to live!"
"Okay.."
1 hour later Amber was sitting in her new bedroom at Stowey house. Not thinking about her mum.
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GreenblueEmerald chapter 4 . 11/8/2016
I really like these stories :-) they're written so well! I
Dreamer Silver chapter 30 . 11/7/2016
Awww this is so sad :( One of the saddest chapters. I'm 14 now but believw it or not, When I was 11 and in Year 7, I used to have a crush on Toby ! :) i have a character called Toby and I think it's a very cute name. xD
chloe chapter 32 . 10/7/2016
i love tee and Johnny
x snow-pony x chapter 38 . 6/5/2016
Oh no, this is so sad! I really feel sorry for Tyler and Sally, they were both just trying their best to just live and then ot all went so wrong. :-( The numbers thing though, Tyler would ask his mum and she would answer how she was feeling, it wasn't him who chose the number. Apart from that I really liked it, can't wait to see Jody's! :-D
Sophie Francis chapter 38 . 6/3/2016
I love your stories buy can you do more for all the ones you haven't done? Pleeeeese
roxy9876543210 chapter 37 . 5/22/2016
My question is do you have fun writing these?
natashalp61 chapter 38 . 5/21/2016
Hey. I love reading your work and I thought Harry's and the 1st Johnny and Tee story's were great. I look forward to reading more.
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