|Reviews for keeping secrets|
| Jem 4ever chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
The grammar is really bad but it's still ok since this was your first story. If you want to go back you can and do a grammar check.
Just remeber to make a new paragraph everytime someone new speaks. It makes it easier to read.
Great start though! I love teir friendship.
| Angelsheart85 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
if only things turned this way ... xD
| xxx chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
somehow too smooth, but it gives a little bit of hope to all those hiding souls 3
| calzonaobessed chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
| TinaraXx chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I love stories like these!Great work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012