Reviews for keeping secrets
Faberrittana99-03 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
The grammar is really bad but it's still ok since this was your first story. If you want to go back you can and do a grammar check.

Just remeber to make a new paragraph everytime someone new speaks. It makes it easier to read.

Great start though! I love teir friendship.
Angelsheart85 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
if only things turned this way ... xD
xxx chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
somehow too smooth, but it gives a little bit of hope to all those hiding souls 3
calzonaobessed chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
TinaraXx chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I love stories like these!Great work!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Ooh, lala.