Reviews for Unexpected Visitor
Clarity's Illusions chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
I like this story a lot! You've put a different spin on's captivating and very well-written. Looking forward to more! :)
RobstenLover93 chapter 5 . 8/30/2012
They need to talk! Can't wait for your next update :)
PrincessB14 chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Loved the chapter and I can't wait till you write more.
psychovampirefreak chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Awesome update! :-)
Guest chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
well big brother;s not worth it, but this is, good work.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
ok, not bad!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
you need to use your spellchecker, it's a fuuny little thing that looks loke a tick. It's HONEY as in what you eat. Let's see where you go!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
cool story is it bellxed well even if it isn't i still like your story creativ
Lady Morganas Heir chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
not a bad start...can't picture jacob/leah pairing though.
Maggie Davis chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
This is pretty good!
pinklady34 chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
Oh man...I'm wondering why jasper came! And how close r they to Bella?
city bookworm chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
I love your choice of Jasper,to come back that is. I'm surprised that he thought that Edith was Bella's though. I wonder what the rest will say when they see Bella getting a piggy-vampire ride from Jasper. Maybe they'd be a better pairing than the usual. He is the one that came back after all. Can't wait to read more.
psychovampirefreak chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Great start!
TwilightLoverShay chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
oh this sounds goood i think it should be esme
JealousOrchardx chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I love this! It's Edward right? But wouldn't of he had a reaction for it sounding like Edith was her child, and she said she loved Jake too. I still think it's Edward though... Or Alice... Or Esme
I'm starting to think there's too many Cullens
Anyway this was great!