|Reviews for Battle Scars|
| Rebecca 15436779 chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
Great start but rubbish ending xx
Love to read more xx
| SerialBookworm55 chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
wow, I love this story, i'm actually re-reading this
| Kat Nightfox chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Is there a reason you feel the need to resort to a negative when it would be just as easy to label the fic as
Gen"? Or to use the "friendship" tag provided by ffnet? By phrasing it that way, you convey an off-putting intolerant attitude. You aren't alone in this, it's the reason I stopped reading fic on ffnet but I foolishly keep hoping to find some authors who don't use the offensive label. Your story was rec'd to me but I can't in good conscience read something by someone radiating such disdain for slash fiction and, seemingly by extension, homosexual relations.
| Jennifer chapter 8 . 11/27/2013
Why does everyone write floor when it should be ground or dirt when the characters are outside? Unless one means forest floor, and if so then they should put in the word forest.
| Jennifer chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
First you said that they went to the horses for supplies and then said that they do not have horses? Which is it?
| hello chapter 4 . 11/20/2013
| Amy Airheart chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
Ok,I loved the whole thing,but if a fic is finished I always first read to the end before I review,so take this for all the awesome chapters. I think it's pretty cool,and what I like is that in all the other reveal fics,Gwaine never is never angry on I like it for being different.3
| Clara Brighet chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Ooh, this is good! :D
| Tara Laurel chapter 13 . 7/31/2013
I read your story offline in almost one sitting. I also read all you have posted for the sequel! This was incredible! Always love a good reveal & was pleased the other knights were highly involved in the story.
Great job. Looking forward to more of the sequel!
| CosmicEssence chapter 13 . 6/6/2013
This started off very impressively, well structured, detailed, with a nice flow to it and plenty of angst. Then somewhere along the way it began to fall downhill, round about the time merlin woke up. Its like you kept jumping bits, the scene would suddenly change from one line to the next or a character would do something that didn't fit with what occurred before. Basically your detail was off. A big one that comes to mind...we have them asking for the first time about the burn scar, chapter ends and then next chapter Merlin's suddenly on his own, escaping camp and the others (considering Arthur and Leon were woken up) are resting or asleep. So what? When he said 'No' they just let it go then turned in for the night? And how the hell was Merlin moving in the first place? You used the excuse earlier of how Merlin seems unable to use magic to heal big things on himself so how is it aside from an 'irritated throat' (and how did he get that without overusing his throat?) that he's walking about like he hasn't lost copious amounts of blood and has a large hole in the side? The devil's in the details and frankly, your beginning chaps were awesome but your later ones were not. I'm also disappointed in the 'reveal'...both in terms of the reaction upon saying 'I killed her with lightening' and the actual explanation of the scars...which didn't actually happen (a complete cop out).
Honestly, its almost like you lost interest half way through because the difference in writing before chapter 7 and after chapter 7 is immense. Story goes from very good to OK. Reread the chapters after 7 and look for yourself at how it jumps around and skims in comparison to your earlier chapters. In regards to Pre-Chapter 7 Loved it. Overall, nice try.
| Auua Ytjoml chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Just a second. How did Merlin get this big gash on his chest THROUGH the shield?
| fireball1012 chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
Loved the story so far and I read the Maximum ride story's.. Waiting for the movie still
| Harpfire chapter 11 . 3/15/2013
Poor merlin hurt and captured
| Harpfire chapter 9 . 3/15/2013
Oooooooo that was unexpected I always thought arthur would exept Merlin without to much stress but that was cool
| Harpfire chapter 8 . 3/15/2013
I LOVE REVEALS OOOOOOOOOOOOOO I am officially in love with this fic now! I was just addicted but now I'm in love