|Reviews for Unexpected Comraderie|
| JayJay chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
Nice start, and I rather like the way you've gone into past situations and suited your explanations to canon, while still adding in a few unexpected twists. Good job!
| Jess-i-Ka chapter 1 . 6/11/2002
Hey, chiKa! Yes, I definitely agree that you got it to flow much better than the draft I saw. Nice job! The only thing I was still a little thrown by, though, was the POV switch... But I knew to look for it. :) Maybe if you put in a separator, or changed the font? Other than that... spiffzilla. Severus should have taken points off anyway. (Mr. Moony suggests five points from Mr. Potter for sticking his small nose into your abnormally large nose's business.)
Anyhoo, never deny your plotbunnies! I think we need to translate that into Latin and make it our motto (like 'Never tickle sleeping dragons'). I wonder what 'plotbunny' translates to in Latin...