|Reviews for The Sins of|
| SaintJacTheGingerNinja chapter 4 . 8/15/2012
This chapter is so heartbreaking :'( But I love how you have written it. Update soon pleeasseee :)
| awesomley awesome chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
whole way through i was thinking. no they have ruined Jac Naylor - she can never be in a relationship with H.H But instead, you have created a master peice. Kudos to that
| hadrians77 chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Such an intriguing story they do have simular character traits don't they, will be interesting to see where you take this. You have their "voices" perfectly. x
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
Aww this is so clever! I love Jac being Hanssen's daughter! Update soon :)
(Btw, I LOVE your disclaimer for the first chapter... ;) )
| charliespike18 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Carry on, please
| Kaishei chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
| SaintJacTheGingerNinja chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Love it! Totally wasn't expecting that ending! Love that Joseph was jealous! :D If this is a multi-chap then update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
i think this story is AMAZING!
But it needs to be alaberated on the idea of Jac being Hansons daughter is Fantatic and I cant wait to see what happends next. :)
| sdbubbles chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Hmmm...interesting. Can't wait for more! Update soon!