Reviews for The Fourth Rider |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this story has been amazing. the ending was explosive, never did I know I needed something so bad. it could be a perfect end, considering Galbatorix rix is now just an experienced swordsman with an enslaved dragon. the edgy scene with dumbledore's haircut could use a touch of polish if you were to return to this fanfic. I loved reading this story. have a wonderful day. |
![]() ![]() The bit with the gods does not sound like something death would agree with. I mean souls are its domain so having gods that are not affiliated with death punish harry seems to be stupid and cruel beyond reason. Please if you want harry punished at least make it by death or one of death's helpers not some random deity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is good but i have a major beef with the part about the gods punishing harry. they have no right to do that because you did not have any of them specifically affiliated with death. so unless death itself punishes harry for what he did with the horcruxes i refuse to see that punishment as justified. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HI. the story is amazing...! are you going to finish or continue it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that's mean leaving me here like this god darn! But a dope story that though laying still 6 years will one day be continued xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can ye at least tell us if you've given up on the story? It seems to be so very close to being complete. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, amazing story! One of the best HP/Eragon crossovers I've ever read! I've loved seeing Harry and Scath's bond grow, and the way you dealt with Voldemort and the wizarding world was brilliant. Murtagh and Harry are very sweet and amusing, as well as hot! I do hope you get the time and inspiration to return to this story - I'd love to see how Hermione and Remus settle into their new world, how they manage to defeat Galbatorix in the end, and how Murtagh and Harry decide to deal with their relationship. Again, a brilliant story that I've enjoyed so much, thank you for your writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this hope for an update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls update! It is one of the best crossover I have ever read! So please continue to write this book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story took my breath away. Masterfully done. I love the concept and how you have worked it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is a reason that deus ex machinas are band. If you include at least one God of intervention then there must be zero tension and with it zero story. As their exsistence forces them to ensure at the very least that Voldemort is stopped in the correct manner. Meaning Harry doesn't end up in alagaesia until after he completed his destiny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |