|Reviews for Just a Simple Game|
| nighttheraven chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
:) heartwarming and a perfect mixture of saddness
| FoxboroSalts chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Oh hey, that was me! I thought I was logged in back then. Now, I feel like I'm spamming your inbox with useless information. Oh well...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
A poignant piece.
While I understand your need to emphasize the 'shoji' bit and its allusion, I honestly felt that this part was unneeded:
'Just why couldn't disputes be settled in a polite, simple manner – through shogi?'
You were laying it on there pretty thick, dood. Asides from that, I have to say that the minimal role Naruto played in this actually made his presence more keenly felt - obviously towards the end; I didn't even realise that he was sticking around.
Also, get back to writing, you lazy bum.