Reviews for The disappearance of Eyeshield 21
doremishine itsuko chapter 5 . 12/31/2013
and what is your new account?
zhuriken05 chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
IMACHI IS MADDDD chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
Dissapearance of eyeshield 21 please!
Mia chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
I love this soooooooooooooooooooooo much! x infinity
Please update this! It's so rare to have such a awesome original story line! The suspense is killing me!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
Please update this story! I love it to bits! It's is an awesome story!
Sachiel Angelo chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Does this have any relation with Katekyo Hitman Reborn? Or are you just using the names. As for that one Japanese word "Aa", it doesn't really mean anything. Its not really Japanese per se. If you are looking for just 'yes' the simplest term would be "hai".
444dodo444 chapter 4 . 5/31/2013
Disappearance of Eyeshield 21 please.
SilverShadow123 chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Damn! Why can't you continue this?
Echo Andalice chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
interesting story .. btw i just want to ask.. are by any change you use khr as reference? ;D
Glace chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
Your translation for 'Aa' is right. There are many translations for "yes" after all.

Love the rewritten! You've gotten MUCH BETTER! no kidding.

Please update soon! To think Sena might have a shrouded past or something (o.o)
ShinigamiinPeru chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
I'm starting to wonder how Deimon will copr through their loss... update soon! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
When r u planning to rewrite this? The story is great; i believe that if the problems are solved, others would come to read it.

After all, there's not much eyeshield fanfics with sena being the bad guy!
Crystal.Azure chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I don't really understand, ah, I mean, I don't understand the plot, words and personal pronoun.
I think you need a beta reader
poisinrose chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
THis is so uber dramatic! It really makes people curious ya know with all the suspence and foreboding and everything... I heartily approve! :-D please update quickly
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