Reviews for The Jackal's Den
StarlitxSky chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
Nothing wrong with taking it slow. Good stories take time. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
No problems with your phrases :) we call it a 'toiletry bag' too. although in my case it's usually just a plastic walmart bag lol.
baby-kitsune9 chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
nice. really nice. think you could get another chapter up?
StarlitxSky chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
This does not bode well...
MayaPatch chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
As Always Modo can't stay calm XD Mhh.. i wonder what will happens in the next :O
baby-kitsune9 chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
awesome spades! keep up the good work.
MayaPatch chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Woot i'm curious now o.o nothing to say for now :O
I wanna a pie too!
ladydaisys chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Those poor mice just cant get a break! Wonder what's going to happen to them?
StarlitxSky chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
Loved the opening visuals for this one. And ugh, writer's block is pure evil!
baby-kitsune9 chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
ohhh, nice. very nice. can't wait for the next one.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
awesome! it's so cool! i can't wait for more.
StarlitxSky chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Oh man, what have they gotten themselves into this time? And wow, what a wonderful moody setting and atmosphere this one has, pulled me right in and had me hooked from the start. You are a truly great storyteller.
baby-kitsune9 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
awesome! i love it! please continue.
MayaPatch chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I'm curious to know more O it's going to be inretesting