Reviews for Liesl
A Light in the Night chapter 11 . 8/5/2012
Great ending! I loved the entire story!
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 6 . 8/3/2012
I thought he might be feeling like this...I'm glad Liesel was there for him!
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
Never thought of Louisa like this, but it works...
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 4 . 8/3/2012
Kurt so desperately trying to be the man he thinks he should be to make things easier on his eldest sister...so touching! Great job!
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
Haha! This is cute! I love the idea of Liesel teaching Brigitta to read!
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
OH! So sad! :(
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Aw! This is cute! Would love it if you carried on here...and did the other kids too...Brigitta's always been my favourite...hint hint...
A Light in the Night chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
Captain! Ahhh I feel bad for him, but mostly for the children. Maybe an ending could be a conversation between him and Liesl about some important things that had transpired when the Captain had been ignoring them. Liesl could say that he was forgiven, because this would add that necessary closure. Just a thought!
A Light in the Night chapter 9 . 7/30/2012
Awww, I really like the made up history!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
The Sound of Music is a great family movie, and your writing portrays it perfectly. The title “Liesl” does not however describe the content of your work accurately. The story is more about Gretl and her how vulnerable she is. Gretl first adopts Liesl as a guardian and thereafter Maria. My title would rather be “Gretl’s guardians”…
A Light in the Night chapter 8 . 7/22/2012
Awww, little Liesl! She seemed so charming and outgoing. Keep up the great writing!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22/2012
I really enjoyed these. They're a little different...a bit dark, insightful, surprising. Nice job!
A Light in the Night chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Awesome story, I am the commenter Coolio (Just got an account)
Coolio chapter 7 . 7/21/2012
Awww, so sad! I am the person who thinks that Liesl and Rolf should somehow end up together. I know he was a Nazi, but there could be a twist that made him good. Anyways... Thanks for the update! I honestly an so excited for a chapter with Georg's point of view!
Coolio chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
i love this story! I feel like Liesl is a really good character to explore. I think that the last chapter should be from her father's point of view! Or maybe a cute father daughter moment just to show that the trouble he caused by ignoring his children has come to a happy resolution. Great job!
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