This is a great story, about one of my favorite characters in the movie. Forgive my ignorance, but what did the governess do to Liesl, you seem to have something specific in mind, but I can't figure it out. Really amazing characterization in this story.

Great ending! I loved the entire story!

I thought he might be feeling like this...I'm glad Liesel was there for him!

Never thought of Louisa like this, but it works...

Kurt so desperately trying to be the man he thinks he should be to make things easier on his eldest sister...so touching! Great job!

Haha! This is cute! I love the idea of Liesel teaching Brigitta to read!

OH! So sad! :(

Aw! This is cute! Would love it if you carried on here...and did the other kids too...Brigitta's always been my favourite...hint hint...

Captain! Ahhh I feel bad for him, but mostly for the children. Maybe an ending could be a conversation between him and Liesl about some important things that had transpired when the Captain had been ignoring them. Liesl could say that he was forgiven, because this would add that necessary closure. Just a thought!

Awww, I really like the made up history!

The Sound of Music is a great family movie, and your writing portrays it perfectly. The title “Liesl” does not however describe the content of your work accurately. The story is more about Gretl and her how vulnerable she is. Gretl first adopts Liesl as a guardian and thereafter Maria. My title would rather be “Gretl’s guardians”…

Awww, little Liesl! She seemed so charming and outgoing. Keep up the great writing!

I really enjoyed these. They're a little different...a bit dark, insightful, surprising. Nice job!

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Awww, so sad! I am the person who thinks that Liesl and Rolf should somehow end up together. I know he was a Nazi, but there could be a twist that made him good. Anyways... Thanks for the update! I honestly an so excited for a chapter with Georg's point of view!