Reviews for Chocolate Box Girl
tris-everdeen99 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Sorry, I'm logged out. I swear, the pairings you write are so bizarre. But your writing style...beautiful, beautifully beautiful. You made me love Neville all over again, and the last line: perfection. The way you tie everything together and tell a story in just one chapter is simply... *garbles incoherently*
keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Oh my God. This was absolutely beautiful. VicNev is one of my favourite M&MWPs, and this was excellently written. It was lovely to see a fluffy VicNev for once - and you pulled it off excellently. Great job! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
An odd pairing, but I still loved it. It really was fluffy and sweet
Jannice Sace chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I have to say this IS a rather queer paring, but I still loved it. It's just so fluffy and sweet I kind of smiled like a maniac whenever Victoire would leave the post-it's
RoyalJamboree chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This is so sweet! I love the way you portrayed Neville as an adult, harrowed yet not without that enduring awkward charm.
Their relationship seemed so natural and free of weirdness despite the age difference. The last description of their happiness together really struck a nice chord inside of me. Great job!
Proud Blood-Traitor chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
That was so sweet. Loved it.
MissDizzyD chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Very nice! Excellently written with a marvelous plot - everything you need to do well. Good luck with the competition :)
Slytherin Sadist Angel chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I can't believe I'm typing this- awwww.
The scene where Victoire giving Neville the chocolates was so sweet!
"I know you don't like chocolates."
So he kissed her.
I loved it.