|Reviews for shatterproof|
| Cookies-and-Ink chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I'm just really getting into reading freeverses and this completely blew me away. There was so much emotion, self loathing and angst and the formatting heightened it. The references to fairy tales were brilliantly woven in amongst the monologue and the shift to Astoria thinking about her relationship with Tracey - honestly I'm so impressed by how much you managed to tell the reader.
Just absolutely brilliant!
| magic doors chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
That was absolutely beautiful - I just sat there thinking "wow" for the whole time O.O I especially loved the line "Glass slippers cut your feet, darling"
So brilliant job!
| keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
This was absolutely incredible! You're definitely very good at writing freeverse && angst, and you showed that well here. I love the story of this poem, and the references to fairytales. Great job! :D
| makes one heavenly chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Earlier today I watched Snow White and the Huntsman (which was amazing) but it was so weird how I read this cause the movie was still fresh in my mind and I could really relate to all the things you wrote. Yeah I thoughourly enjoyed reading this. Keep writing for ever and ever
| MissDizzyD chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Again, incredible and different to what I expected. Well done and good luck with the competition :)