Reviews for A Life of Matt Roberts
Wetland king chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Name: Vincent dantes

Nicknames:the charming devil, lady's man, lucky bastard.

Age: 15



Appearance:white hair, sharp blue eyes, athletic body.

Casual Clothes (Outside of School):black leather duster, no shirt, leather pants and black boots.

Winter Uniform (Gloves, Scarf etc.) white scarf, black gloves, black hooded jacket worn over it.

Winter Casual Style:black leather duster with red fluffed inside, black jeans, black boots, black button up shirt, red tie and black fedora.

Wand: (Length, Core, Wood)
Length 13 ", dragon heartstring core, holly wood.

Pet (optional)small black bat by the name of ebon. Which he usually transfigures into objects including a sword, book he writes spells in, knife, lighter, pen and many other things.

Extra- Curricular Activities: wizard duelling club, the Vincent dantes fan club.


Best Friends with Matt -1
Rival for Matt
Part of Quidditch Team for Gryffindor
Part of other houses Quidditch Team
Friends with Rival

Magical Strength:transfiguration

Magical Weakness:divination

Smart (1-10): 7

Popular (1-10):9 (among the female students)

Attractiveness (1-10):10

Favourite/Hated Subject:favourite defence against the dark arts. Hated: muggle studies because its common knowledge.

Favourite/Hated Place:favourite-the library. Hated: dittention he is there often.

Bogart: a large wooden doll shaped like him with chainsaws for hand and blood leaking from mouth.
Patronus: giant bat.
Oz Vessalius the B-Rabbit chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Oh i would love to see the new novel! I tried writing a book didnt turn out so well :) i hope your novel has more success than mine did! Good luck!
guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Please update soon! I love the story so far!
IamthesonofAthena chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Good story! Here's an OC.
Name: Brady Robinson

Age: 15

Gender: Male

House: Ravenclaw

Appearance: short brown hair, tan skin, blue eyes

Casual Clothes (Outside of School): Loose red shirt, black knee length shorts, black sneakers.

Winter Uniform (Gloves, Scarf etc.) Winter uniform, Ravenclaw scarf and gloves.

Winter Casual Style: same as casual but with jeans

Wand: (Length, Core, Wood) Ash wood, 13 inches, core of dragon heartstring

Extra- Curricular Activities: Quidditch-beater

Role: Friends with Rival

Best Friends with Matt
Rival for Matt
Part of Quidditch Team for Gryffindor
Part of other houses Quidditch Team
Friends with Rival

Magical Strength: transfiguration

Magical Weakness: charms

Smart (1-10):10

Popular (1-10):7

Attractiveness (1-10): 8

Favourite/Hated Subject: Transfiguration/charms

Favourite/Hated Place: Hogsmead/Great Hall

Love Interest: Any of the female OC's

Boggart: Bear

Patronus: shark
Ninja Kat chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
Faye can be Luna Lovegood (I didn't even think how much they could look alike) if that's fine with you
Ninja Kat chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
OC Form

Name: Faye Elizibeth Marie Greystone

Nicknames: Bitch, Shorie, Hot-head, and Snake (she despises these names).

Age: 15

Gender: Female

House: Slytherin (she hates her house)

Appearance: Faye has pin striaght platinum hair that layered and choppy thats breast length with choppy bangs that cover half her face. Faye has almond shaped silvery green eyes that are usually set in a drop dead glare (her eyes scare everybody) with long lashes and she wears sunglasses when out side because her eyes are extremely sensitive to light (resulting in her hating the sun). Faye has a heart-shaped face with high cheek bones, with her cheeks slightly sunken in but still a bit rounded showing that she is still young, and a button nose with a silver nose ring on the side of her nose, and she has three silver earrings going up both her ears. Faye has a small slender body that is toned ( it's a amazing what Quidditch does to your body, not so much for finding clothes), she has deathly pale snow white skin (she barely stands in the sun for 30 seconds) and she stands at an intimidating 5'2 (note my sarcasm here) and weighs 100 pounds (no matter how much she eats she sadly never gains any weight), and has a not too small but not too big bust size.

Casual Clothes (Outside of School): She has a gothic/tomboy style, wearing band T-shirts (Linkin Park, Three Days Grace, Skillet, Paramore, Flyleaf, or Avirl Lavigne, these are bands she listens to) or long sleeved shirts, she only wears cargo pants and her studded silver belt, she only has two pairs of shoes, one being a pair of worn in all black converse and the other being worn in grey Doc Martains with the top flared With black ribbon lacing, and her favorite grey hoodie. (just for extra info, she does not wear skirts, so she wear black cargo pants instead of the skirt with her uniform)

Winter Uniform: She wears her winter robes, Black leather gloves, black boots, her house scarf and hat.

Winter Casual Style: She wears her usual cargo pants, Doc Martains, a long sleeved shirt, her hoodie, a beenie with a skull on it, and her leather gloves.

Wand: 11.5, Wolfsbane, Willow

Pet: A black cat with green eyes named Alley (yes that where she found her, so why not call her that) and a snowy white owl with specks of grey on his back and wings named Edwin.

Extra- Curricular Activities: Quidditch (Beater)

Role: Part of Slytherins Quidditch team, she not best friends with him but she doesn't hate him or dislikes him (I'd say Acquaintances)

Best Friends with Matt
Rival for Matt
Part of Quidditch Team for Gryffindor
Part of other houses Quidditch Team
Friends with Rival

Magical Strength: Potions, DADA (Defence Against the Dark Arts), and Care of Magical Creatures.

Magical Weakness: Charms and Transfiguration

Smart (1-10): 8

Popular (1-10): 4

Attractiveness (1-10): 9

Favourite/Hated Subject: DADA (favorite) and Charms (hated)

Favourite/Hated Place: Quidditch Field (alone) and Slytherin Common Room (it's soo... Creepy...)

Love Interest: One of the guy OCs (one that will match her but also be opposite of her, weird I know)

Boggart: Death Eaters (a Death Eater was ordered by Voldemort to kill her parents)

Patronus: A Wolf

Okay just so you know since you didn't put a personality on the form, she is short-tempered and pretty violent (that's how she got into Slytherin) but she is very distant toward people and gets annoyed easily, she is often seen alone and doesn't talk very much. She is sharp tongued and is one hell a Beater, feared among her other team mates and house. She can be civil with others, she knows if a person is trustworthy or not (you can tell from their eyes). She does have trust issues and isn't close to many people.

And that's it, hope you pick my character to be in your story, it would be most appreciated :)
Coin of Light and Darkness chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Name: Sakura Blossom Aishiteru

Nicknames: Star child, star girl

Age: 15

Gender: Female

House: Slytherin

Appearance: Emerald eyes, fair skin, fire-red hair reaching her waist

Casual Clothes (Outside of School): all clothes are in pink, white, blue with yellow stars/moons/suns, somewhere on them

Winter Uniform (Gloves, Scarf etc.) School Uniform, robes, green/silver earmuffs, dark blue gloves and a white and black bandana scarf.

Winter Casual Style: A hot pink tracksuit with silver swirls on the jacket, pink, heart-shaped earmuffs, pink gloves, pink and silver snow boots and a pink scarf.

Wand: (Length, Core, Wood) 12 inches, unicorn hair, cherry blossom

Pet (optional) : Snowy Owl called Yue and a Siamese cat called Keroberos

Extra- Curricular Activities: Cheerleading, music (she plays the flute) and dancing

Role: Friendly Rival

Magical Strength: Spell creation, potions creation, astronomy, divination

Magical Weakness: flying on brooms, magical plants, Arithmancy

Smart (1-10): 8

Popular (1-10): 7.5

Attractiveness (1-10): 9

Favourite/Hated Subject: Potions and Astronomy/History of Magic

Favourite/Hated Place: Astronomy Tower and the Potions classroom. Dumbledore’s gravesite and the Whomping Willow

Love Interest: Any male OC

Boggart: Nightmare (black horses that are evil and the haunt the dreams of all who dare to cross them)

Patronus: Panther

Admires: Severus Snape, any spell/potions creators, Cassandra Trelawney

Blood: Pureblood (Lives like a Muggle, not prejudiced)

Family: Father-Ross, older brother-David, mother-dead, Cerberus-family dog.
Subjects: Astronomy, Charms, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Herbology, History of Magic, Potions, Transfiguration, Ancient Ruins, Divination

Extra Curricular Subjects: Ancient Studies, Music

Extra: Exchange student from Japan. Enjoys rollerblading. Hates spicy food. Dislikes Ghosts. Loves Angels and unicorns. Speaks English fluently and only a few words of her native language slip in like Nani, Kuso, Sensei, Baka, Gomen, Arigato and Daijoubu. Often calls Matt, Matt-Kun, she uses the Japanese honorifics as well.

Catchphrases: Hoe. Everything will be fine. My star will guide me.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Name: Conner Watson
Age: 15
Gender: Male
House: Ravenclaw
Appearance: Dirty blonde hair, green eyes, tall for his age, usually has a know-it-all look
Casual Clothes (Outside of School): Black t-shirt and long jeans black shoes
Winter Uniform (Gloves, Scarf etc.) Ravenclaw scarf, long pants and wizard robes
Winter Casual Style: Long black pants, Black shirt and Ravenclaw scarf
Wand: (Length, Core, Wood) Kingwood, 14 in, essence of dragon scale
Pet (optional) brown owl
Extra- Curricular Activities: Quidditch (seeker)
Role: Rival for Matt
Magical Strength: Transfiguration
Magical Weakness: Charms
Smart (1-10): 10Popular (1-10):8 among the Ravenclaws
Attractiveness (1-10): 8
Favourite/Hated Subject: Defense against the dark arts/Charms
Favourite/Hated Place: Hogsmeade/Class
Love Interest: Any girl OC
Boggart: Vampires
Patronus: Vulture
MaraDoesNotSparkle chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Mistake in mine, Jaymie's wand is 14 5/8
Oz Vessalius the B-Rabbit chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Yay this is awesome :D great job!
TheWriter'sMistress chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Glad you like my OC! Oh, and is my OC paired up with DJ? Cause if she is I don't mind. :)
TheFlameBlade chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Nice chapter I like how you got all the OCs in. Plus this looks like a great story. Can't wait to read more.

Deuces Up!
Nyx'sBlackRose chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Thanks for including Kaia; I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
MaraDoesNotSparkle chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Name: Jaymie Kennedy

Nicknames: Jay, Strike (because she is an excellent keeper)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

House: Gryffindor

Appearance: Medium-long slightly wavy medium brown hair. Hazel green eyes. Fair skin. 5'4 with curves, but not fat. Surprisingly strong for her appearance.

Casual Clothes (Outside of School): (Since she's a half-blood) classic rock band shirts from when her (muggle) dad was a teenager. Dark skinny jeans and Converse (Chuck Taylors, never anything else)

Winter Uniform (Gloves, Scarf etc.) Gryffindor scarf and gloves, Hogwarts black beanie.

Winter Casual Style: Long sleeve house sweater and house scarf, black skinny jeans and Chucks.

Wand: (Length, Core, Wood) 12 1/4 in., phoenix tail feather, oak with red cedar handle.

Pet (optional) white short haired cat with blue eyes (female) named Lennie, short for Lennon (after John Lennon from the Beatles.)

Extra- Curricular Activities: Envolved with S.P.E.W. and is the Gryffindor keeper.

Role: Best Friends with Matt, Part of Quidditch Team for Gryffindor

Magical Strength: Charms, hexes, and jinxes.

Magical Weakness: Astronomy

Smart (1-10): 9

Popular (1-10): 8 (among Gryffindor) 5 (other houses)

Attractiveness (1-10): 8.5

Favourite/Hated Subject: Charms/Astronomy

Favourite/Hated Place: Quidditch pitch (outdoors) Gryffindor common room (indoors)/ Dungeons

Love Interest: An OC boy that she's friends with, which ever one you want.

Boggart: a venomous spider, not a tarantula

Patronus: a Shelby dog (she has been fond of them since she was a kid because her neighbor had one)
Nyx'sBlackRose chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Well, I'm not sure if you have enough Ocs already, but I'll submit mine anyways; I hope you can except her:

Name:Kaia Black(she is very distantly related to Sirius's family; nothing to stress in the story)
Nickname: Kai, Kai-Kai
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Curly shoulder-blade length chocolate brown hair, longish bangs, tall, slim, dark blue eyes.
Uniform: Usual house uniform, silver bracelet with music note charms.
Casual Clothes outside of school: Dark blue Chinese shirt with silver trim, black slacks, blue slip-on shoes, silver bracelet with music note charms.
Winter uniform: heavy black leggings under robes, Black and silver knit hat with cat ears, Gryffindor scarf, black gloves.
Winter casual style:Oversize blue sweater, heavy black slacks, black fingerless gloves, blue headband, silver bracelet with music note charms.
Wand: 8.5 inches, Dragon heartstring, willow.
Pet: A pair of tabbies named Coricopat and Tantomile.
Extra-Curricular Activities: Tutoring, chess team.
Role: Friends with Matt
Magical Strength: Magical plant and creature care, charms, jinxes and hexes.
Magical Weakness: Divination.
Smart: 10
Popular: 5 (She's a shy brainiac)
Attractiveness: 7
Favorite/Hated Subject: Herbology, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Care of Magical Creatures/Potions.
Favorite/Hated Place: The library/the dungeons.
Love Interest: you decide
Boggart: A big, black human shape with lots of eyes and mouths. (Google Fullmetal Alchemist-Father-2nd form. You'll get what I mean.)
Patronus: Cheetah
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