|Reviews for Naruto: To become a great ninja!|
| Shade chapter 2 . 4/11
Shame you didn't continue with this i would of liked to of seen this one go on, even more then your other fanfictions apart from the 'fishcake affairs'.
| Neonlyphe chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
This naruto is a freaking badass
| Mitobu chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
they're not 16 yet, they should be closer to 13 by this point of the story. just something I was thinking about while reading, and was hoping to see a bit of explanation for it if it was on purpose.
anyway, loving the story so far and hoping to see more in the future, really enjoy your writing style
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2016
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23/2016
if you are making Naruto x Mei pairing then give naruto a big dick so he can satisfy a mature woman
| LittleRed8801 chapter 2 . 12/31/2015
When is your next chapter coming out! Me want!
| The Kromann chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
I just finished reading the only two chapters out and I gotta say that this is one of your best. Will you ever update it again? I have a thirst for more.
| KagomeGirl021 chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
this has an interesting start to a naruto story. will this ever be continued? it's been over 2 years since the second chapter was given. please do update this soon. i am curious to see what will happen next.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Again a good update, please keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2015
Please update, it's a great story and I'd hate to see it end. Also I kinda hoped Kakashi would face more repercussions, after all he did neglect them so much and I hated tht part of the manga and anime so much. Anyway keep up the good work!
| ivan0061509 chapter 2 . 3/14/2015
This was a really good chapter I can't to see wht happens next
| dragonfox123 chapter 2 . 1/17/2015
| CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Shove it up your ass Kishimoto lover.
| Nirvana48 chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
How come you never updated this? This actually sounds pretty good! S:
| PugTheMagician chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
i am very happy with this story, aside from the fact it hasn't been updated for 2 years but i knew that when i started reading. from what little is here i am impressed. you have more setting, plot and charecter development in these two chapters than some authors have in 10. the lengths of your chapters is quite nice as well. i liked your explanation as to why naruto was such a moron, very inventive. i love how you did the fight with kiba, and i checked out the video you got the inspiration from, very nice. i like that this naruto is more of a "you be nice to me and i'll be nice to you" kind of person, with the only problem being not many people were. i like how things went with kakashi trying to get naruto kicked out of the program and his subsequent punishment for being wrong. i do think that sarutobi was a little lenient but i agree that the jutsu scrolls are of much more use to him than money would be right now. if you ever return to writing this i will look forward to it