Reviews for Out Of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love Andrew and Buffy's relationship in this. Adored the letter's Joyce wrote to Spike. Loved everything, hope you continue, but understand if you can't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! You stopped! This story is so good. I really hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god I'm ADDICTED to this story! You really capture the voices of the characters perfectly! I read this entire thing in 24 hours -mostly sneaking in reading at work. I can't WAIT til you update again! Please please finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered this story and I like it. The premise is really interesting and your prose is vivid and refreshing. And I love the absence of Angel interaction. One thing that bugs me is how much the story jumps around that makes it become needlessly confusing. I can't tell whether this is because it is your plan or whether it took years to write. Also, I can see a drastic change in your writing style which makes some of the chapters much better and less confusing than others. Also, it would probably be best to tone down the amount of block italics. Many readers have a tendency to skip over block quotes, parenthetical, and italicized sections. As much as these issues annoy me and I only wanted to point them out so you could be aware of your weaknesses as a writer, I think the story is a lot of fun and its unique spin makes it very refreshing. I hope you continue writing and I am eager to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo glad there wasn't any Buffy/Angel love interaction, so sick of that guy! Waiting on pins & needles for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still have a few more chapters to go, but I just wanted to stop in and say I am LOVING this! Great job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I think I just discovered a gem here |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will favorite and follow because this is bloody good writing and spikes letters to dawn had me in tears. it so seemed like something he'd write to her. i just really hope that spike and buffy end up together. Have you watched angel? spike does get brought back to life. :) and im so really happy you have faith backing her up because she is the best friend that i always though buffy needed. really great job and can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eagerly awaiting the next update! The premise of this fic is fascinating. The levels of angst heart-wrenching, but beautiful. I really hope Buffy and Spike can still somehow someway achieve their happily everafter. Maybe through this prophecy and this weird mirror-like connection? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally sobbing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, this is getting interesting. I'm glad I rediscovered this. I read the first couple of chapters ages ago, but then I think I just forgot about this story. Which was utterly stupid of me, I'm realising. Lot's of Spike POV in this chapter, which I like. It's interesting that Buffy is seeing 'evil' Spike now, instead of the kind of good one from season 5/6. I liked all the references to School Hard in this, like Woodstock and the Boxer Rebellion. That's my favourite episode, so I love seeing references to it. I think I will stop typing now, and go read the next chapter. Signed, The Mad Vampire Poet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant wait to see wherebit goes next. Also what is in the damn box haha. I would have looked asap |