Reviews for The Chosen
toffecat20 chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
In the first chapter it was a little difficult to transition from night to day.. I would suggest inserting a page break or something else to let the reader know that a time change has occured
Rose099 chapter 68 . 8/14/2016
Update
WickedBlue chapter 68 . 5/26/2016
That was a lot of fun so far. A long fic but it hasn't gotten boring yet at all.
And I really like your OC and her relationship with Derek.

Just wondering now, what you will do with season 5. I hated having no Derek in the show.
Padackllinsy chapter 68 . 4/19/2016
I love this so much and I can't wait to see where it's going! I really hope you continue this story!
Guest chapter 68 . 2/29/2016
Please update! I absolutely love this story! You are an amazing writer!
Guest chapter 68 . 2/19/2016
Update?! Please...
Guest chapter 58 . 2/19/2016
Curious to know what she actually is... Hummmm
Guest chapter 57 . 2/19/2016
Oh Ma Gord! I LOVE THIS STORY!
BreenaBelle-xoxo chapter 54 . 11/12/2015
I gotta know what Katherine is. Great chapter!
Guest chapter 52 . 11/11/2015
Another great chapter. Katherine is a very tough girl, it would be nice to see her have a weak moment, and even more interesting to see Jennifer actually come between Derek and Katherine. Can't wait to read more, your a great writer.
BreenaBelle-xoxo chapter 49 . 11/11/2015
I am curious if Jennifer will intervene on Derek and Kat's relationship. Great chapter though.
BreenaBelle-xoxo chapter 39 . 11/8/2015
Really hoping to see some sweet moments between Kat and Derek. They are boyfriend and girlfriend after all? Right?
Maria-emrys chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
good fan fic
Guest chapter 68 . 9/6/2015
CONTINUE, PLEASE!1
haera.quill chapter 28 . 8/7/2015
Some of your paragraphs are really wrong and should be cut in half for easier reading. Other than that, awesome story!
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