|Reviews for We could be one|
| tri-edge14 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Lynne's hair is brown not blonde.
| Redline57 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This was sweet. I hope you continue it!
| Zoids Fanatic chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Cute little story. I always like LxY. Nice to see people are writing more of them (and let's all hope they remain canon. Stupid movie).
Now then, into the review.
First and formost, the biggest mistake you made was with Lucchini. For some reason or another, you would call her (both narratively and when someone is speaking) as Lucchini. Made the same mistake before, so it's common. I also saw spacing and grammar errors, though I didn't notice many spelling errors.
That be all. Good luck with your story.