Reviews for This is Spirit: Defective Souls
CoookieM chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Love it...
autobotgirl12328 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Hmm. Interesting to say the least. I think the explanation of Medabots though is overdoing it and not needed. The race to the school goes on a for a while as well. The story itself, according to the summary, seems an awful lot like the canon story with author insert or Mary/Gary Sue alert which will turn more readers away than gain. That's my opinion. The characters are good though and so is the writing. It is well written.