Reviews for Palm Springs
associatedbears chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
I loved this. Well written, great premise. I love Kerry out of her element! More please?
SimplyWoven chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
As you know, I love this! I like that Kim's packing habits tend to be a running joke through many different stories and that you incorporated it in this one, and I think you ended it nicely. And I REALLY like the characterization of Craig and Joel...I hope we get to see more of them later in the story.

The only problem is that the first 20 "paragraphs" (as in where a new line or set of lines begin) is repeated after the paragraph that begins "Hello, all! Welcome to our sunny paradise!"

Overall, great job. I can't wait for ch3 and I'll probably spend a lot of time pestering you about it until you post it :)