Reviews for The One with the Hand
Sam chapter 1 . 4/5
Haha well made xD
Godisgood3 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
that was good! I liked slims perspective
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
this doesn't sound very different from the actually scene, but it's interesting how you added your own touch here.
it's barely noticeable which is good because you have adapt to the style of steinbeck, but sticks out enough that someone well-read, like me, could notice (and compliment you on it)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
is it just me who think slim is hawt