|Reviews for The Dark Lords Ascendant|
| IGAF-kun chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Awesome beginning. I look forward to the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon.
| souleater333 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
A'right, the next part of the awesome Dark Lords series is out, an not a single little error to speak of, imho, great just got epic... Keep up the good work dood!
| sandcrawlr chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I was happily suprised to find the next installment of this series. I'll admit a little confusion at the time warp ;p but i'm assuming its on purpose. Love the story, keep up the writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
SO MUCH SET UP, I can't wait for the execution.
| SlowMercury chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I'M SO EXCITED! I can't wait to find out what happens next, and I'm already very *very* glad that the Senshi birthday party looks like it's going to be catered by the Nerima Wrecking Crew. I am gleefully supposing that the new big bad won't be expecting the ninja catering services offered by Ucchan's. But the NWC is pretty famous in the martial arts world, so maybe he *will* be expecting them after all...
I'm worried about the NWC, though - it looks like most of them aren't doing as well as I'd hoped. :( I guess this is going to be a more serious story than DLON, since it's labeled Action/Drama rather than Action/Humor?
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Excellent chapter with wonderful details, you really capture the emotions flying around. Very well written, good fight scenes. I like how the comradeship between the members of the Nerima Wrecking Crew is still strong.
Quick question, if I may: Will the Sailor Senshi, (Pluto may already know) ever find out the truth behind the "Dark lords of Nerima" and what happened with the forces of earth during the last battle against Beryl?
Keep up the excellent work!
| Urfan chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Holy shit.. I cruised past your profile to see if anything new came out and I found this.
So... more mature, hardcore Ranma fighters getting ready to throw down with OC-super villains and the Senshi.
Senshi I might add that have a full complement of reality hax wargear, planet-killers, and time machines.
Unless Ranma, Ryouga, and Mousse have (and with Mousse it looks it) have hit ultra master levels of skill they're fucked.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I liked how several plot points from the past are presented so as to remind us of them, but not in a expository dialog sort of way. Ryouga's relationship woes and Shampoo's & Akane's relationship are nicely intriguing. Moose's new ability seems quite powerful, but probably the only power-up he's ever gotten.
I appreciated that the typical flow of "brainwash the hero's rival so he has some one to fight" was averted in the flashback.
The evil-CEO-martial artist seems like a cool antagonist so far. Not that we know much about him or his motivations for doing whatever it is that I'm sure will bring him in conflict with the heroes.
| Lotono chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
And so it begins once more... I will very warmly look forward to every installment of this piece. Here's to hoping it exceeds even your own expectations for it.
| kitsune75 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Definitely looking forward to more of this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Oh, good! Another sequel! And much more interaction than the second right from the start I see!
On with it!
| Author Roy chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I'm looking forward to more. I'd like to be more helpful but I didn't spot anything that needed attention. Thanks for posting.
| HakumeiJin chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Great to see the story continue. The time skip to after sailor moon seems interesting since the Great Freeze is usually seen as inevitable. (Hell I'd assumed it was more a natural disaster that could only be averted in a very small area) I'm looking forward to seeing what our new villains are planning since shaking the pillars of heaven is pretty ominous.
I also enjoyed seeing how the Nerima Crew is continuing their lives. It's nice that Mousse was able to find a way around his blindness though it's probably still pretty hard since I'd assume it isn't anywhere near the same thing as sight. And all the others are seemingly going towards bad conclusions to their problems. Ryoga is an especially big problem since as Beneda observed everyone is just leaving him alone thinking he'll be alright on his own.
Also I was wondering how our heroes would join in as soon as the birthday party was mentioned and Ucchan's seems like a pretty good idea. I wonder if something will actually happen during the party making them crash the party or if they'll actually join in as friends/waiters to see how the Senshi are doing.
Even though the story seems to be getting darker with actual deaths in the skyscraper I still hope the heroes will be able to get their happy ends.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
And thus the greatest story on continues
| AnAncientBard chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Updates are soon I hope?