Reviews for Art of War
KayleeChiara chapter 9 . 1/12/2015
Another intense chapter! And utterly frustrating for Anna having to suffer the injury and not comprehending what's going on. I think the only personal challenge I had were the 'f' bombs... more of a personal thing not a commentary on rating... I'm going to assume it's a reaction of the character... given the situation I guess I'd probably swear too! Thanks for writing and I can't wait to see what happens next!
E-man-dy-S chapter 9 . 1/7/2015
Your OC is being way to slow on uptake, and her constant swearing is irritating.
Other then that your story is wonderful.
Thanks for updating.
xVentressx chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
I'm glad to see that you've updated:)
I'll wait for more:3
infinity angelic wolf chapter 9 . 1/7/2015
Love it
Jimmy 144 chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
Very good. Cute with getting Carlos back
Deacog chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
Please update soon XD
Bee4ever chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
Awesome chappie!
E-man-dy-S chapter 8 . 1/3/2015
That would be funny if you made the horse in to a cybertronian horse. :) But also cool to.
KayleeChiara chapter 8 . 1/3/2015
Cute story you've got here! I've enjoyed the entire thing and I hope you'll be writing more soon! Thanks for writing!
xVentressx chapter 7 . 1/2/2015
Interesting story until now.I'm curious on how it is going to continue.
You want to create a Cyber-horse?Sure,why not?XD
You just got yourself another reader:)
A-Mais-Pura-Preguica-do-mundo chapter 8 . 1/2/2015
I'm starting to read his story now, and I can tell you how amazing it is. Understand how there is no time to write, but everything in its time, is not it? haha
I think you should put the horse as a Cybertronian! I would be so much better than killing a poor animal ...
His story is amazing! Continue on your time ...
( Sorry my bad translation )
adelphe24 chapter 8 . 1/2/2015
Just keep him as a horse.
Bee4ever chapter 8 . 1/1/2015
Don't kill the poor horse!
adelphe24 chapter 7 . 12/28/2014
Excuse me but I believe u have forgotten to update this story for sometime. ...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY SOON!
I must see what happens I love this so much!
JerseyPrime23 chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
This is a really great story so far. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the great work and update again soon! :)
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