Reviews for Kumo Seal Master, Naruto
Guest chapter 47 . 7/11/2020
Great storyline looking forward too next chapters
noplaynogame3 chapter 47 . 6/20/2020
please more
Samuel Santillan chapter 46 . 5/27/2020
queroel capitulo 48 49 y 50 para saber que pasara con naruto
Guest chapter 29 . 5/18/2020
Why does he get involved in everything that is? What does he care about Sasuke? Why does everyone want to push friendship between Sasuke and Naruto? Here he is generally from another village, but you still want to somehow make friends between Naruto and Sasuke.
ShikonMiko17 chapter 47 . 2/26/2020
Please write more I would like to see what happens next
evanonymous chapter 33 . 2/2/2020
...you had Jiraiya teach him the rasengan after he talks to him once...and while he still believes him to be a KUMO GENIN...because he "has a hunch he can trust the kid with it"? Just...just stop. Please.
evanonymous chapter 29 . 2/2/2020
Oh my god how do you get THIS FAR in a story and still have literally no plot progression? When is Naruto being from Konoha, the kyuubi jinchuuriki, his parents being so important to konoha, or any of the other countless issues that actually matter; going to be addressed? Why the fuck didnt you just make this a story where he was BORN IN KUMO, because you make absolutely everything about your "premise" completely irrelevant.
evanonymous chapter 2 . 2/2/2020
Okay yeah this is painful to read, the 3rd is already portrayed as a fucking idiot with an IQ of 60.
keller.blair1 chapter 20 . 2/1/2020
I'm amazed Excalibur exist here too
keller.blair1 chapter 19 . 2/1/2020
I didn't know Europe existed in the elemental nations
keller.blair1 chapter 7 . 2/1/2020
A bow for a ninja
010283772shuwhsyyywhh151551 chapter 36 . 12/4/2019
But yeahh naruto with a bikini hinata is best thing hahahhahha...
010283772shuwhsyyywhh151551 chapter 36 . 12/4/2019
man i don't know i love your stories but monologue between naruto and neji sometimes makes mee cringe a bit. ...Hope you can update this fic since i know you still well activee...
Guest chapter 9 . 9/22/2019
Dragging the whole parent reveal thing out so much. You’re telling me all naruto did for 3 fucking days is just think think and think. Annoying
lou2003us chapter 47 . 9/6/2019
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!
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