" just the jails that hold the jailers." You should correct it...Otherwise nice chapter..

Nice I cant wait to read more

good chapter

Boring as s**t.

at least naruto and kirabi are getting along just fine.i hope that both naruto and samui are in the samu genin team with karui and omoi.i also hope that naruto gets the chakra chains and the naruto gets the rinnegan and he uses it in the chunin exams against kiba that should make konoha's council wet themselves with you can have mei terumi and temari placed into naruto's harem.

i wonder what will the 3rd hokage do when he finds out that naruto uzumaki namikaze is alive and living in kumo.i bet that konoha's council will try to force the 4th raikage to return him at naruto tells the 3rd hokage that he knows just who his parents are he should tell him this"i want my inheritance at once or i will inform the fire daimyo about just how the 4th hokage's son was mistreated".once the 3rd hokage and the fire daimyo gets informed about this personally hand over to naruto his whole inheritance no questions 's council will disagree with the 3rd hokage's and the fire daimyo's fire daimyo then disbands the civilian council and has some of them before naruto heads to konoha for the chunin exams he should meet shizuka and shion.

Good chapter.
Thanks for fixing chapter 2.

Great chapter I like it

Great first chapter

Good story
But there appears to be a problem with chapter 2

I think there is a little problem with your story. Chapter 1 and 2 are the same and when I began to read the chapter 3, it was evident that a chapter was missing. I think it would be a good idea to correct this.

lively the continuation supert history

-Nin-

What the f.u.c.k chapters one and two are the same. FIX IT!

continue loving the fanfic