Reviews for Oops!
Friendly tip chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
You should learn how to write complete sentences and when to not use the comma. And for everything that is Holly just keep a line of story in your head and don't mix it up, you confuse your readers!
Jasmine Melody chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Must have more! CHI! Give up the goodness! Pretty Please. _
cheryl0603 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
interesting though the way the party is described is rather american or non japanese but i like how the stories going. keep it up :)
bassoongirl14 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I hope you do a continuation! Some Sesshy/Kagome romance would be awesome!
doit chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
You must you must you must continue, if u dnt I can die. Dnt make me die of sadness
ruby chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
there should be more to this than one chapter. I want to know what happened after sesshomaru picked kagome up?
chibi-Clar chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
U should totally continue this story it's awesome! Maybe... Seshy likes kagome?
He reacted strong on kagomes situation!
RaggingLightningWolf chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
aww how cute and yet funny yes please continue
Silver eyed lass chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
continue the story peas it was really good!
4Ev3rDarkArti5t chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Pretty Plllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssss eeeee with a cherry on top, continue this story!()(O)/ And I loved it!
koko chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
mountain lion chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
You should finish it and you have some spelling mistakes near the bottom :) but your doing good :)
Demon-Art-Lover1 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
kind of strange ending, but overall, a good story :)
The beauty of complexity chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Please continue it is a matter of my existence. I simply must know what happens next!
Mahasana chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Sequelllllllllllllllll plissss...
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