|Reviews for Oops!|
| Friendly tip chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
You should learn how to write complete sentences and when to not use the comma. And for everything that is Holly just keep a line of story in your head and don't mix it up, you confuse your readers!
| Jasmine Melody chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Must have more! CHI! Give up the goodness! Pretty Please. _
| cheryl0603 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
interesting though the way the party is described is rather american or non japanese but i like how the stories going. keep it up :)
| bassoongirl14 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I hope you do a continuation! Some Sesshy/Kagome romance would be awesome!
| doit chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
You must you must you must continue, if u dnt I can die. Dnt make me die of sadness
| ruby chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
there should be more to this than one chapter. I want to know what happened after sesshomaru picked kagome up?
| chibi-Clar chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
U should totally continue this story it's awesome! Maybe... Seshy likes kagome?
He reacted strong on kagomes situation!
| RaggingLightningWolf chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
aww how cute and yet funny yes please continue
| Silver eyed lass chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
continue the story peas it was really good!
| 4Ev3rDarkArti5t chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Pretty Plllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssss eeeee with a cherry on top, continue this story!()(O)／ And I loved it!
| koko chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
| mountain lion chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
You should finish it and you have some spelling mistakes near the bottom :) but your doing good :)
| Demon-Art-Lover1 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
kind of strange ending, but overall, a good story :)
| The beauty of complexity chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Please continue it is a matter of my existence. I simply must know what happens next!
| Mahasana chapter 1 . 11/12/2012