Reviews for A Bold Move
20Chloe02 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Pleeeeeeeaasse continue!
Jazmin THE SPUFFY lover chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
then what happens?
Twilightsatellite chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
It always bothered me that they never touched in this scene! Even the lightest touch would do! From now on I'll remember this scene with other eyes! ;) Good job! Wish it was longer..
VanessaJJ chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
If only Bella and Edward were that bold in the original ... Nice os
EdwardsSnack chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
It only the real story had gone like this... I'd love to read more!
BiteMeEdward3 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
This is hella funny you'd expect edward to b all mad but I really like it pls, Pls,PLs,PLS! Write more I really wanna c where this story goes! :)