Absolute brilliance. Much as I might have loved for you to have spend more time with the SOLDIERS, Cloud, Aerith and so forth, this captured each of their personalities so well even if I might somewhat prefer the less exuberant Cloud of canon (but I completely understand why he changed). The brief glimpses of them but more than anything else of Tseng, Genesis and, of course, Vincent, is all done beautifully. The ending was wonderfully executed. Congratulations on an excellent story, I only wish that it had been longer by which I mean that the individual events had been more fleshed out.

Still very nice.
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heheheheheheheheAHHAHAHAHAHA HAH! Freaking LUVED IT! I laughed my ass off so hard that grams was asking if i was chokeing yet lol

Perfect

This was amazing. I absolutely loved it!

Wow. This is great! Never really read a Vincent-centric fic without at least more mention of Cloud, but there you have it. This is definitely one of the best (of the limited number) that I've read.

'scuse me, can't review longly, laughing too hard.
Vincent is awesome here.

So paralyzing, yet amusing at the same time. I love the way the plot works out and how you unfold things. I'd just love to know how the Turks (actually, pretty much everyone) of this timeline are trying to wrap their heads around and get a grip on the matter. Because, they really don't know that 'Lance Strife' had indeed already been a Turk ages ago. Lol- "impersonating a Turk." Bet they're mindblown.
But I'm sad that the only time Vincent ever felt ANYTHING real was when Sephiroth saw him as his father. That was paralyzing. I guess the hard, driven logic of this Vincent just roots me to the spot. Great story.

Awesome story. Thanks for the great read. Really looking forward to more from you.

You should do one from Cloud's prov. I'd read it! This was so incrediably cool. Loved it!

This is awesome. I just spent the last two days reading this and seriously wondering why I hadn't before. I just love the characterizations in this, especially Vincent's going back to his Turk roots. And the mind games between him and Tseng were intriguing. Overall, this is a wonderful story.

xDDDDD! devious!Vincent FTW! FTW! LOVE.

Why yes, it's a rambling, nonsensical review. So? x3

This.
THIS.

THIS is so friggin' good, it's gold! I couldn't put it down, I love it! Especially how Tseng just ended with the upper hand XD And Vincent's almost break-down too, in the mansion... awww. Will there be a sequel?

Once a Turk always a Turk, eh? Thing is, Vincent would still think of it as "Planet, Comerades, Self, Others," instead of the normal "Shin-ra" like before. Wonder how long it would take Tsung to figure that out.

Well written and quite enjoyable (with the exception of the one use of very harsh language, which I found strange as while there was swearing in the rest of the fic, there wasn't anything that would hint leading up to that and so I found it distracting) and just fun enough to be thoroughly enjoyable. :)

Greatly enjoyed this story. I don't think I have read any others where Vincent goes back in time. Your characterization and plotting were both good. This story wasn't particularly deep, but I don't think that that was your indention, and it succeeds in being interesting and engaging.

My only criticism (and it is minor) is with your writing. You have a lot of small mistakes littered throughout the story. Things like mixing up word order and mixed tenses. Fixing those would give your story an extra little bit of polish.

Thanks for writing,
-Adam