Your mention of mutated tonberry's had me laughing. It's from another story I know that much, was it one of yours?

Well, that was amusing. It has the feel of an outline for a far longer story (and I find, more and more, that I need to play those other Final Fantasy 7 games)

It's definitely interesting, though, and it's also rather amusing how you drop Vincent into the situation and let him have his fun. And the ending's just hilarious.

Hahahahahahaha, I can't help but wonder if Vincent didn't see that coming. *giggles* I love this story!

...Niiice. I really like the variation on the time-travel concept...

Hehe. Awesome, awesome ending! Love how the Nibelheim incident resolved itself and how the Turks finally caught up with "Lance". Wonder if they will ever discover his true identity and what happened to "young" Vincent. But you left the ending open on purpose! I don't suppose I can hope for a sequel? :)

Anyway, thanks for writing and posting such an awesome story!

Wow, this was a great read. It's nice to see a different time travel story and seeing it from Vincent's perspective was great. Great idea, great execution. I'm looking forward toward the conclusion.

hehehehehe! Yippee, but this is fun! Just reading my way through all your stuff in no particular order. Have I told you lately how much I love your stuff? I really do, and this one is a great example of your literary genius.

AHHHHHH! Hurry up and post! I wanna know how Vincent has underestimated Tseng and if its gonna be bad or not. Your killing me here, my dear.

Tseng! He's underestimated Tseng? (Well, Tseng IS a ninja like that.)

What does he know?!

(I love this story so very much. Turk timetravelers FTW!)

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This is an interesting story. Thank you for the post.

Wow. Nice fic so far, I hope to see more:)

This has been great. I can actually see something like this taking place as it is very much within Vincent's character. Am eagerly awaiting the rest of the story.

Oh my god! I love this - I LOVE that Vincent finally acts like a freakin Turk, rather than the brooder that cannot get over the 'sins' of his past that arn't even his! I think he was wronged in the canon (a ridiculous notion, i know) and i love every single story I come across where he is acting like a kickass Turk instead of a ninny. I can totally see him cackling to himself and making shit up to screw with people, and i love it! Okay, I will now move on to chapter 2...

Wow. I actually came here to check on one of your other stories, but I'm so glad I stumbled upon this one. I'm glad you chose to take a somewhat unconventional route to this, such as Cloud's insecurities not entirely based upon villagers/bullies and soldier, that Vincent isn't just storming the gate, but setting the battlefield in addition to sabotaging the enemy- totally Turk, totally awesome. Looking forward to an update. :D

Nice and interesting story. Very exciting and an unusual idea to send back Vincent and how he handels it.
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