wow, what a well-written and intricately plotted story! I love time-travel fics where the character is so cold and calculating and knows exactly what they're doing. And also love fics where the author makes full use of Vincent's Turk one's definitely on my radar :)

Chapter 1 of this had me snickering all the way through. Vincent definitely wasn't the only one cackling madly on the inside when he facked all those documents.

Nice touch to have him shamelessly fake Lucretia's diary. And yes, Lucretia seems to have had it coming. As far as getting even with someone Vincent probably still has feelings for goes, this is definitely an elegant and productive way to do it.

I'll be sure to read the other 2 chapters as soon as I have time. This story looks really interesting.

I swear I fell in love with this story when I read the first paragraph! Now you say there's only going to be one more chapter... not to mention you did it at the end of a cliffhanger. All that aside I'm still going to read this story.

This is an absolutely brilliant story! I love it! One more chapter, you say? Then I can't wait! Please update again soon! I can't wait for Tseng's reaction and perhaps confrontation. Love all the changes to the story line! It's absolutely genius! :)

totally love how vincent is acting all turk like-dont see that so much- and getting his way - like hes got everything scripted out and everything follows- makes me wonder what tseng and the other vincent are going to do!

Wow! Just wow! Vincent is a sneak :) Love how he twisted Genesis into sponsoring Cloud - just in case Cloud needs to kick Sephiroth's butt. And I like that Sephiroth threatened the President into letting Angeal and Genesis come back!

Actually, I like everything - except the last line . . . it makes me sad that it is over for now and at the same time it makes me wonder what Tseng has been up to.

I can't wait for more :)

I loved this chapter, especially the metaphors about the pebble and dam. I also liked how you had Vincent create a network. Only one more chapter? I can't wait to see it then. I love Tseng and I'm curious to what's he going to do. Update soon please!

That was simply amazing! I love how you handled this part . . . Especially the kid spies. Tseng should be interesting too:)

good going Vincent. I wounder what Tseng was doing all this time, hmm watching Vincent maybe. can't wait to find out the rest.

Love it!

Well isn't this an interesting gem? (grins) I hadn't imagined such a manipulative Vincent... but it works so well. What does Tseng have in store for Vincent? Does he figure out his identity? I eagerly await the next chapter!

This story is all kinds of funny. I love the path your story is following. It is very well written and I didn't notice any glaring mistakes. The characters are behaving a way I've rarely seen before. I'm enjoying this story immensely. Keep up the good work.

I can't wait! Don't leave us clifhanged for long!

This is absolutely magnificent! I've never seen a story where Vincent winds up in the past by himself before.

This is a very interesting idea you have here and I can't wait to see more.
It's so rare to see a time travel in FF7 about anyone who isn't Cloud, and I'm glad that someone has actually done a Vincent time travel!

I notice that you have a lot of brackets in your writing to designate extra information/ character's thoughts. Some brackets can be removed and just be replaced by a comma at the front. I don't see why it's necessary to put so many of your sentences in brackets.