Oh my gosh this is bloody fantastic. Made me so flippin' happy. Thank you so much for this story you wonderful human being you.

-falls over dead- -a wisp rises from the corpse laughing hysterically-
I love you. I really really love you. You have forever made my entire weekend and just turned my shitty day around.
This was amazing. And thank you for not killing my second favorite, or favorite, FF characters. Absolutely adored the ending. About half way through the chapter I was like, 'He'll either die, dismantle, or be recruited.' I think the option you took was the best.
Yay happy endings!

Gods, I find this beyond hilarious. The changes and matter of fact writing get to me. I was crying through tears at one point.

-dances- Uncle Lance!

And more importantly... Genesis!

The only thing I could think of this between my mad goggles was, 'Oh my fucking god.' Just a mantra on repeat. I'm so psyched about the rest.

This is one of the stories that I tend to come back to and reread over and over. It's just so brilliant! The way Cloud develops with his new influences, the process Vincent goes through to manipulate everything to his ends, the dialogue is excellent, the storyline is wonderfully logical. I love this story so much, it's definitely one of my top favourites. Thanks for writing!

Wow, this is really great. I always imagined that Vincent can be the Sephiroth's father. I love the story line. It's very unique and beautiful. I'm at awe at what you let Vincent do. Haha, I enjoy the part where he altered Lucrecia's diary. I don't know what to say anymore. It's totally awesome that you leave me speechless.

Thanks for sharing this master piece to all of us. :-)

A very enjoyable read!
While I don't think this is a true depiction of Vincent (as the turks were more about simple protection in his youth) I thought the story had lots of humor and thought put into it.
Thank you!
PS: I was reading this while sitting next to VarianN, who just so happened to glance over and read the bit about the tonberry. We later saw your disclaimer and had good laugh! :D

Awesome! :D

This was so good! Love Vincent as the magnificent bastard :)

Hi, you created absolutely stunning story. It is really original and so catching in its only four chapters there is so much said and still unsaid that it allows the readers spread the wings of their fantasy with the untold stories and possible outcomes. And in the same time you were able to give a nice disclosure with a bit of an open ending. It is perfect story. Though you could create sequels to any persons in this story just to show more if you want or leave it:) Love the Genesis and Cloud connection and also the others. I just wander if in the times of shinra were DNA detectors and if Vincent after the eperiments could be recognised as a former turk though :D

This...
Time traveling Vincent written well. Absolutely amazing. And full of those little blurbs of eloquence, especially with the manipulating Genesis bit. And there are some unanswered questions-what of Hellmaker and Gallian Beast?
I'm a bit disappointed with the length; you told much more often than showed events, and it seems more like an outline to an epic than an epic in and of itself.
Nevertheless, this will be favorited and reread. Thank you for sharing this work with us!

Serdecznie,
Ciekawa Osob

Bitter-frigging-sweet ending

hurts but good.

Viiiiinnniiie. Too sad. but good enough. impressive writing skill, love it.

This was a lot of fun to read and a great fic. I liked the plot and how well it was written. I almost wish it had either more to it or a sequel to show how this new future goes later on. Ja.

I love this story by this point but... why does every last goddam time travel fic seems to enjoy forgetting about Tifa?!