Reviews for All Would Be Good
seri raven chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
YOU MADE ME BALL MY EYES OUT! T_T that's was so sad but I loved the ending!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Wow the description was great; I actually felt as if I was there! That could make a sick movie right there. There's two super small almost unnoticable mistakes: 1 at the beginning put a semicolon after don't worry when you say "don't worry i'm going to get you out of here" and instead of awoken put "awakened" but great job.