|Reviews for Severed|
| District4-divergent-nephilim chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Love it. So touching
| District4girl chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
So good and touching I cried at the end
| District4girl101 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
It brought tears to my eyes... So touching
| A-Bookworm-Named-Steph chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
i love these oneshots! they are amazing, I can figure out who's point of view from just reading the story.
| Nikki ur BFF D chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Nothing but awesome. Its amazing how you can write these stories. My favorite is probably the one about Clove. It's cool how you relate it to the song.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
OMG HEY ITS BEKI! I LUV CH1! BEST FANFIC!...LIKE EVER!;) sorry tho, my moms getting cranky, so i dont think i can continue, but i promise i will the second i can. I LOVE YOU CLOVE! CLATO FOREVER! n now im inspired to start an account. hmmmm...
| ovoxogang chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
This is so good...you have great grammar which is usually hard to find. Your writing really portrays Clove's emotions, which I love, and she is IC. Keep writing :)
| September Samstar chapter 5 . 8/19/2012
This was so good. So sad, but so good. You just have the perfect words to convey the unique pain each character feels. That's an incredible gift.
| badeshipper14 chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
This is so good! you had me crying at rue! Just...wow
| Pinkbookworm7 chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
Beautiful writing, even though it's sad. Great job!
| bluespades chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
Something to point out, in "You now, there really is nothing more scary than being alone" you spelt "know" as "now", but it's probably just a typo error everyone makes, it's ok :)
I like the way Rue compared herself to a light, and how her family is in the dark without her. Great writing. Could you do this for the Catching Fire characters as well?
| bluespades chapter 4 . 7/28/2012
Again, great job on this chapter. The contrasts between their family backgrounds are shown well.
| bluespades chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
A couple of past/present tense errors here and there, like in "I am not really a human then" it should be "was" instead of "am".
Otherwise it was a good job, I like your writing style :)
| bluespades chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
This was good, I like the way you related Cato's feelings to Clove's and their friendship.
| bluespades chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
This was rather poetic, it was really good and nice to see what Clove was thinking.
Great grammar :)