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this was good, thanks.

Just How Much of a Timeline are we talking about here. The Potterverse timeline was about 10 years before the present day. The MCU timeline as of Phase 1 was actually a couple years earlier than the present day, so a lot of years should not have elapsed. I'm also surprised things with Ginny had not progressed a lot further before Harry discovered he was not aging. I imagine there would be time for them to Marry and have one kid.

That was a fun story. One possible thread that you may have dropped was the character of Bruce that hermione spoke with in the prologue. Thought that might have been banner and that they would talk all techy when they met again. I suggest a name change or the addition of a sur name to that character if that is not what you intended. A romance of Luna and Bruce might be fun as a one shot as well. Her placidity would balance his rage side well.

I am really trying to catch up with the easily skimmed time-skips, I really am. It's rather fast, though.

I think I'll still read further. It is starting to look a bit interesting.

Fun story. At first, I was kind of exasperated when i thought it was just going to be yet *another* redo of the avengers movie, with minor originality. Thankfully that wasn't a big part of the story. I thought that overall the story was pretty good, if a little lacking in background and detail for Death and Pestilence. Anyway, good job and thanks for writing. And as far as a sequel goes, I'm honestly not sure that's a good idea. I feel like the whole tension between Death and Pestilence, and their masters, was the main part of the story line. Now that Harry isn't MoD, it kind of makes it impossible to continue on that way.

Why enough? Turn him into a vegetable like they did Nev's parents. At least kill the battery so he can' kill again.

Interesting story so far. Justed wanted to advise you to be careful with pronouns. There were some sentences where it's not exactly clear who each pronoun referred to (for example you might have a "he" and "his" referring to different people in the same sentence).

I really liked how you slipped Harry into the Avangers plot line. The original part was good too, but I can't decide if I'm happy for Harry or not. Bummer.

Just read about Pestilence and her master. The obvious answer is for Harry and the other master to make the marriage that Death avoided. Right?

Go Nevil!

This has been a delightful read! I loved your characters, both your takes on the known Marvel and HP, and your originals. I liked that, unlike most Harry-leaves-the-country stories, he stayed in touch with his friends. Their relationship was wonderful. I wonder if they'll throw him a party when he starts shaving? I'm also very interested in the dinner with the Dursleys...

This fic has just taken on a sudden, jarring and unwelcome mood change.

It's a different story, about different characters, with different plot scales.

Sadly I cannot continue reading this. I've had to choke down the 2nd half of this chapter as is.

What a disappointing, whimpering end to something which I previously greatly enjoyed...

-N

Well...

That escalated quickly.

These new concepts were introduced too suddenly, I feel.

Not that they're bad concepts, but I'm sure it's never pleasant to hear "And now for something completely different!"

-N

Fascinating!

"Welcome to Potterland! Where common sense and logic are merely guidelines. Please leave your sanity at the door."

-N