Lovely story.

This has been a wonderful story, but am sorry to see it end. Thank you.

This is a wonderfully written story, definitely one of the better ones I've read on fan fiction. I can't believe I haven't read this one before. Well done and I look forward to seeing more of your works.

It has been a very long time since I have read a story that put me at peace when it finished. This story did exactly that. I don't know if I have ever been as relaxed after a story as I am now.
I feel like some parts were somewhat rushed, but that added to the emotions and plot of the story. This was very well written, and I hope you keep writing.

Hoping to enjoy more of your works,
MKBP

The ending ruined the entire experience for me.

There were things that I wasn't happy with, but my Suspension of Disbelief covered those. The ending just annoyed me.

Harry was an auror? Really? The spells he does are so simple and limited. Like is stupefy his favorite spell or something? How about using summoning spells, or wards or anything! Also, I hate it when a new character is introduced into a situation and nothing is changed. It's the same exact outcome, everything remained exactly the same. Add a new twist, add some dialogue with Harry being involved. Also, make Harry's abilities reflect his age. It's almost like he's still 15 and back in the battle of the ministry. Otherwise, pretty good. I like the character building and everything but the fight scenes are not very well thought out.

This was such a fun read!

Jelly Babies! Loved it!

It's interesting to see the depth in Neville's character - the deep seated loathing buried behind a kind soul. I mean, I love canon Neville, but I really like seeing the human side of him as well in this story. And I don't blame him for it. I would even hope that with his stronger magical power, the pain he inflict on the Lestranges would be twice as much. 'Pureness' is overrated, anyway.

Your version of Death is somewhat endearing. He seems very human, what with his bits of advise and opinions. I rather think he sounds somewhat like Hermione.

I would really like to see some really strong character for Death though. Maybe he can be a prankster of sorts, or a blood-pop addict, or tends to scream in Sanskrit when panicking. Something that makes him stand out a little more.

Good job! I liked the involvement of Hermione, Ron, Neville, Luna and George :-) good ending, let the guy have a lifehe can enjoy :-p good job!

Dude, this chapter left me feeling fucking awful. Please do us a favor and never use this viewpoint for a whole chapter again. -_-'

But other than that, it was a good read. Been marathoning this whole story over the past few days, and now I'm finally taking a break due to my stomach deciding it's not agreeing with me over this chapter. Yeargh.

But it's still good writing, even if the latest character is really sickening to me. I mean, no offence but the thought of someone just being that blatantly malevolent... I dunno. Maybe I'm being too judgmental and all, but the thought of it really makes me sick unlike anything else I've ever read in fanfiction.
That's a compliment, by the way. No worries! As long as you keep up the quality, I'll keep reading.

No thanks, downplaying something so immense as DEATH is simply boring to me, I mean seriously, you have MASTER OF DEATH telegraphing his spells by calling them before casting?

His 39, and you still have him acting like a teenager, a fairly annoying one at that.

But seriously, his Master of Death, and you make it sounds like all that means is immortality, for crying out loud the fucking Asgards should be respecting the crap out of him, and they dont even know who he is.
Stop downplaying the Master of Death thing, severely annoying, if you didnt want Harry to be powerful why did you give him the title Master of Death, makes so sense, all he can do now is achiveable without the Title, immortality, granted abit harder, but still doable.

Interesting, abit odd having Hermione being so successful when shes so incredibly stupid, but oh well.

I do hope however that this isnt a whine-Harry story.
With shits like "I want to be able to die!" and shit like " I never asked for any of this!" things like that teenage pissing bullshit makes me mad, just fucking deal with it and grow up already.

Lol, PI in Chicago! Hope he and Harry Dresden got along.